Hi, Cyril Brulebois <k...@debian.org> wrote (Fri, 30 Jul 2021 03:44:44 +0200): > pu/firmware-v1 exists now. > > > I'm not very used to best practices when it comes to end-user doc in > > general and to the installation-guide package in general, so I'd be > > happy for other to build on those suggested changes, and amend/reword > > as required! > > That's still true!
Don't know, if I am better in this respect, but here we go :-) (also, not a native english speaker here) Regarding the mentioning of "black screen": I seem to remember that there were also reports, that people had a garbled display instead of a black screen, so we should way something like "In some cases, a successful installation can still end up in a black screen or garbled display when rebooting into the installed system. If that happens, some workarounds can be tried to log in anyway" ----------------- "Once logged in into the installed system, it is possible to automate the detection of missing firmware, and to perform the require steps to enable them following this procedure:" require -> required ----------------- "<itemizedlist> <listitem><para>Pass the <code>nomodeset</code> option on the kernel command line. This might help boot in a <quote>fallback graphics</quote> mode.</para></listitem>" boot in > booting into (?) Holger -- Holger Wansing <hwans...@mailbox.org> PGP-Fingerprint: 496A C6E8 1442 4B34 8508 3529 59F1 87CA 156E B076
