Re: Bas Wijnen 2008-04-07 <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> The short description starts with the name of the program.  Short
> descriptions shouldn't do that.  There is a lintian warning about this,
> which seems to have been circumvented by using "The program Njam", which
> looks even worse.  Instead it can be
> 
>       full-featured pacman-like game
> 
> Its features (cross-platform, multiplayer) can be detailed in the long
> description.  For the short description "full-featured" should be
> enough.  If you must mention one feature in the short description,
> "cross-platform" isn't the best one either, see below.

I'd even drop "full-featured" - that's just a buzzword. It doesn't
even tell anything about the package, a complete pacman implementation
is just pacman, I wouldn't expect network support.

I'd suggest something along "pacman-like game with multiplayer support".

Christoph
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