On Tue, 2009-06-02 at 09:53 +0200, Christian Perrier wrote:
> The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these
> templates, and the proposed changes are attached to this bug report.

I'm not the maintainer of libpam-ldap but I would like to comment
anyway.

>  Template: libpam-ldap/rootbinddn
>  Type: string
>  Default: cn=manager,dc=example,dc=net
> -_Description: LDAP account for root:
> - This account will be used when root changes a password.
> +_Description: LDAP administrative account:
> + Please enter the name of the LDAP administrative account.
>   .
> - Note: This account has to be a privileged account.
> + This account will be used automatically for database management, so
> + it will be granted the appropriate privileges.

The new template text seems to suggest that the account will be created
when installing the package, specifically the text "it will be granted
the appropriate privileges" is incorrect and should probably read "the
account needs to have appropriate privileges assigned in the LDAP
directory".

>  Template: libpam-ldap/dblogin
>  Type: boolean
>  Default: false
>  _Description: Does the LDAP database require login?
> - Choose this option if you can't retrieve entries from
> - the database without logging in.
> + Please choose whether the LDAP server should enforce a login before
> + retrieving entries.

The same applies here, something like "Please choose whether the LDAP
server enforces a login before retrieving entries."

Having said that, I would welcome a review of my package (nss-ldapd) ;)

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