Donald Norwood wrote: > We would very much appreciate reviews and translations for the work which is > available here:
A couple of lines I'm not sure about: <p>Debian 12 <q>bookworm</q> ships with several desktop applications and environments. Amongst others it includes the desktop environments: </p> "Several desktop applications"? I've got several desktop applications open right now. Is it trying to say something like "several desktop environments each providing a full suite of applications"? Also: <p>This release contains over <b>11,089</b> new packages for a total count of <b>64,419</b> packages, along with a significant reduction of over <b>6,296</b> packages which were marked as <q>obsolete</q> and removed. <b>43,254</b> packages were updated in this release. It contains packages along with a reduction? I'd suggest: <p>This release contains over <b>11,089</b> new packages for a total count of <b>64,419</b> packages, while over <b>6,296</b> packages have been removed as obsolete. <b>43,254</b> packages were updated in this release. -- JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package