On 2023-11-19 22:45 +0100, Debian Project Secretary - Kurt Roeckx wrote: > > More information can be found at: > https://www.debian.org/vote/2023/vote_002
This is generally good, but can we fix the typos and English-as-2nd-language issues before voting? Or is it too late already? I don't feel we should be putting out an official project statement with mistakes/English like this. And (assuming we are going to fix this) it feels wrong to vote on a text before it is finalised. Things I noticed: 1) Discoverded -> Discovered 2) "a fine-tuned, well working system " This is very peculiar, not really correct, english. At the very least 'well-working' needs hyphenating. "well-functioning"? "tried-and-tested"? Maybe just re-arrange the sentence. 3) "to keep even with" -> "to retain parity with" 4) "It is not understandable why" -> "It is not comprehensible why" or probably better: "It is not understandable why the EU aims to" -> "It makes no sense for the EU to aim to" HTH (did none of the seconders notice this stuff?). I guess I should join -project or -vote some day... Wookey -- Principal hats: Debian, Wookware, ARM http://wookware.org/
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