Hi Andrew,

On Fri, 20 Oct 2023, Andrew Stubbs wrote:
>>  Additionally, I wonder whether "Fiji" should be changed to "Fiji
>> (gfx803)" in the first line and whether theĀ  "," should be removed in
>> "The ... configuration ... , and no longer includes".
> Fair enough, how's this version? (I like the comma, even if it is optional.)

it's definitely fine. I do have a recommendation and a question, though 
feel free to go about them as you prefer.

+  <li>The default device architecture is now <code>gfx900</code> (Vega).</li>

How about starting with this as the first sub-item, as a "positive", 
then follow with the deprecation?

+<ul>
+  <li>
+    The Fiji (gfx803) device support is now deprecated and will be removed from

Could this be "Fiji (gfx803) device support" without the article?

Gerald

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