On Wed, Nov 23, 2022 at 11:30:54AM -0800, samay sharma wrote:
> Thanks for the feedback. Addressed all and added markup at a few more
> places in v6 (attached).

Thanks.  It looks good to me.  A couple thoughts, maybe they're not
important.

 - LZ4 and Zstd refer to wal_compression and default_toast_compression,
   but not to any corresponding option to basebackup.

 - There's no space after the hash mark here; but above, there was:
   #Setup build directory with a different installation prefix

 - You use slash to show enumerated options, but it's more typical to
   use braces: {a | b | c}:
   -Dnls=auto/enabled/disabled

 - There's no earlier description/definition of an "auto" feature, but
   still says this:
   "Setting this option allows you to override value of all 'auto' features"

 - Currently the documentation always refers to "PostgreSQL", but you
   added two references to "Postgres":
   + If a program required to build Postgres...
   + Once Postgres is built...

-- 
Justin


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