Hi Antoin,

please find my comments below.

Il 19/02/2024 16:41, Antoin Verschuren ha scritto:
So, if I understand this correctly, the chairs asked the document shepherd to declare that there were no substantial changes made during WGLC between versions 05 and 07 and all raised issues were addressed.

The answer below I interpret as: We would like the permission from the WG to not only substantially change draft-ietf-regext-rdap-rir-search in a next version that we want to send to the IESG, but on top of that also clarify or even change the interpretation of RFC 9083.

If this is the question, then we need to have a discussion what this will mean to other documents and it’s interpretation of RFC 9083 first, and perhaps even write this clarification down in a separate document if that is needed. When that is done and consensus is reached,  we must issue a new WGLC for  the next version of draft-ietf-regext-rdap-rir-search if that will contain these substantial changes suggested by the WG.

[ML] Yes, that is the question.

I would also like to outline that, in this case, the difference between correcting nits (i.e. ,  some unnecessary extension identifiers included in the rdapConformance array as it is shown in some examples) and changing substantially the draft depends just on the interpretation of RFC9083 and such a question revealed to be matter for WG discussion when the different interpretations came up.


Best,

Mario

In order to reach consensus, all comments and support during a complete WGLC must be for a stable document. Otherwise we don’t know if people agree with what version of the document and which interpretation of RFC 9083.

Regards,

Antoin


Op 19 feb. 2024, om 13:07 heeft Mario Loffredo <mario.loffredo=40iit.cnr...@dmarc.ietf.org> het volgende geschreven:

Hi Antoin,

after a private discussion between  James, Tom, Jasdip and me, we agreed on the following:

1) Some minor edits that don't substantially change the draft but clarify the meaning of some sentences will be done in next version

2) We would like the WG members express their own opinions on the substantial matter below.

*/RFC 9083 states the following for rdapConformance included in non-“help” RDAP responses:/*

*/·The data structure named "rdapConformance" is an array of strings, each providing a hint as to the specifications used in the construction of the response./*

*/·A response to any other request will include only identifiers for the specifications used in the construction of the response./*

*/There is no normative language that specifies exactly what identifiers are included in the response, where there is the language of “hints” and “used in construction of the response”.  Below are options for what identifiers are included in the “rdapConformance” array that could be captured in the RDAP Extensions draft:/*

/*Option 1) only the extension identifiers used to build the response with regard to the fields*/

/*Option 2) all of the extension identifiers that impact the build of the response, hence with regard to fields, values, and query members / query parameters used for the response (i.e. Option 1 + extension query identifiers and extension identifiers impacting response values)*/

/*Option 3)  all of the extension identifiers defined by specs used to build the response (i.e. Option 2 + any extension identifier defined by referenced specs) */

*//*


Option 1 corresponds to a literal interpretation of normative language in RFC 9083, while Option 2 extends its meaning.

Option 3 is further extensive and corresponds to the interpretation used in rir-search. To better explain their position, the authors asked me to add the following note (please Tom and Jasdip elaborate, if you think I missed something or didn't present correctly your point of view):

"documents may mandate specific behaviour around identifiers for the purposes of signalling, and it's fine for this sort of thing to override the requirement above. (nro_rdap_profile_asn_flat_0 and nro_rdap_profile_asn_hierarchical_0 are examples of this, where the document itself requires implementations to pick one or the other, and that's fine.)"



Best,

Mario


Il 05/02/2024 15:35, Antoin Verschuren ha scritto:
Hi All,

After some prolonged discussion, the chairs will now close this working group 
last call that should have ended 11 December 2023.
We have had comments and approval during WGLC from 4 working group participants 
and the document shepherd and no objections.
That has lead to 2 new versions of the document during WGLC that started with 
version 05.

The document shepherd for this document is Mario Loffredo.

In order for the document to progress and sent to the IESG, the document 
shepherd will need to do a final review of the following:

1. Please confirm all suggested changes have been addressed in version 07.
2. Please ask James Gould to confirm his changes have been addressed as he 
promised to do another review.
3. Make sure the Nits are addressed.
4. Confirm that all changes between version 05 and version 07 are editorial and 
not substantive.
5. When all the above concerns are addressed, please write the document 
shepherd writeup.

Thanks to everyone that contributed to this review!

Regards,

Jim and Antoin
REGEXT WG Co-Chairs


Op 27 nov. 2023, om 15:51 heeft Antoin 
Verschuren<ietf=40antoin...@dmarc.ietf.org>  het volgende geschreven:

The document editors have indicated that the following document is ready for 
submission to the IESG to be considered for publication as a Proposed Standard:


RDAP RIR Search
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-rdap-rir-search/05/


Please indicate your support or no objection for the publication of this 
document by replying to this message on list (a simple “+1” is sufficient).

If any working group member has questions regarding the publication of this 
document please respond on the list with your concerns by close of business 
everywhere, Monday, 11 December 2023.

If there are no objections the document will be submitted to the IESG.

The Document Shepherd for this document is Mario Loffredo.

Thanks,

Jim and Antoin
REGEXT WG Co-Chairs
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