Reviewer: Wesley Eddy
Review result: Ready
This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's
authors and WG to allow them
Reviewer: Wesley Eddy
Review result: Ready with Issues
Comments:
- The document is well-written and easy to read.
- Section 6 is really nice and helpful!
Issues:
- The way an implementation understands the TCP ExIDs may benefit from slightly
more explanation:
-- In 4.2 and 4.3, is the idea
Reviewer: Wesley Eddy
Review result: Ready with Issues
I only found 1 real "issue" in reading this document, and a few smaller nits,
described below. None of these comments are specifically related to IoTDIR
type of concerns, and it doesn't seem like the protocol would be intended for
use in
Reviewer: Wesley Eddy
Review result: Almost Ready
This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's
authors and WG to
Reviewer: Wesley Eddy
Review result: Ready
This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's
authors and WG to allow them
Reviewer: Wesley Eddy
Review result: Ready with Issues
This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's
authors and WG
Reviewer: Wesley Eddy
Review result: Almost Ready
This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's
authors and WG to