Re: RFR: 8314480: Memory ordering spec updates in java.lang.ref [v29]

2024-05-08 Thread Brent Christian
On Wed, 8 May 2024 08:33:31 GMT, Alan Bateman  wrote:

>> Brent Christian has updated the pull request incrementally with one 
>> additional commit since the last revision:
>> 
>>   small grammar fixes
>
> src/java.base/share/classes/java/lang/ref/Cleaner.java line 224:
> 
>> 222:  * Actions in a thread prior to calling {@code Cleaner.register()}
>> 223:  * > href="{@docRoot}/java.base/java/util/concurrent/package-summary.html#MemoryVisibility">happen-before
>> 224:  * the cleaning action is run by the Cleaner's thread.
> 
> In passing, you could reduces the html refs to 
> "package-summary.html#MemoryConsistency" and 
> "package-summary.html#MemoryVisibility" as it's the same package/directory.

MemoryVisibility is in java.util.concurrent 

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PR Review Comment: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/16644#discussion_r1594785182


Re: RFR: 8314480: Memory ordering spec updates in java.lang.ref [v29]

2024-05-08 Thread Alan Bateman
On Mon, 29 Apr 2024 21:17:24 GMT, Brent Christian  wrote:

>> Classes in the `java.lang.ref` package would benefit from an update to bring 
>> the spec in line with how the VM already behaves. The changes would focus on 
>> _happens-before_ edges at some key points during reference processing.
>> 
>> A couple key things we want to be able to say are:
>> - `Reference.reachabilityFence(x)` _happens-before_ reference processing 
>> occurs for 'x'.
>> - `Cleaner.register()` _happens-before_ the Cleaner thread runs the 
>> registered cleaning action.
>> 
>> This will bring Cleaner in line (or close) with the memory visibility 
>> guarantees made for finalizers in [JLS 
>> 17.4.5](https://docs.oracle.com/javase/specs/jls/se18/html/jls-17.html#jls-17.4.5):
>> _"There is a happens-before edge from the end of a constructor of an object 
>> to the start of a finalizer (§12.6) for that object."_
>
> Brent Christian has updated the pull request incrementally with one 
> additional commit since the last revision:
> 
>   small grammar fixes

src/java.base/share/classes/java/lang/ref/ReferenceQueue.java line 39:

> 37:  *
> 38:  *  href="{@docRoot}/java.base/java/lang/ref/package-summary.html#MemoryConsistency">Memory
>  consistency effects:
> 39:  * The enqueueing of a reference on a queue (by the garbage collector, or 
> by a

In passing, I wonder if you're actually meant to say "on a queue" here.  
Elsewhere the API docs speak of adding and removing, e.g. the enqueue method 
speaks of adding a reference "to" the queue.

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PR Review Comment: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/16644#discussion_r1593659540


Re: RFR: 8314480: Memory ordering spec updates in java.lang.ref [v29]

2024-05-08 Thread Alan Bateman
On Mon, 29 Apr 2024 21:17:24 GMT, Brent Christian  wrote:

>> Classes in the `java.lang.ref` package would benefit from an update to bring 
>> the spec in line with how the VM already behaves. The changes would focus on 
>> _happens-before_ edges at some key points during reference processing.
>> 
>> A couple key things we want to be able to say are:
>> - `Reference.reachabilityFence(x)` _happens-before_ reference processing 
>> occurs for 'x'.
>> - `Cleaner.register()` _happens-before_ the Cleaner thread runs the 
>> registered cleaning action.
>> 
>> This will bring Cleaner in line (or close) with the memory visibility 
>> guarantees made for finalizers in [JLS 
>> 17.4.5](https://docs.oracle.com/javase/specs/jls/se18/html/jls-17.html#jls-17.4.5):
>> _"There is a happens-before edge from the end of a constructor of an object 
>> to the start of a finalizer (§12.6) for that object."_
>
> Brent Christian has updated the pull request incrementally with one 
> additional commit since the last revision:
> 
>   small grammar fixes

src/java.base/share/classes/java/lang/ref/Reference.java line 393:

> 391:  * Clears this reference object. Invoking this method does not 
> enqueue this
> 392:  * object, and the garbage collector will no longer clear or enqueue 
> this
> 393:  * object.

"will no longer clear" means that it won't do it again, if you see what I mean. 
I think this would be easier to read if changed to "will not clear ...".

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PR Review Comment: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/16644#discussion_r1593651535


Re: RFR: 8314480: Memory ordering spec updates in java.lang.ref [v29]

2024-05-08 Thread Alan Bateman
On Mon, 29 Apr 2024 21:17:24 GMT, Brent Christian  wrote:

>> Classes in the `java.lang.ref` package would benefit from an update to bring 
>> the spec in line with how the VM already behaves. The changes would focus on 
>> _happens-before_ edges at some key points during reference processing.
>> 
>> A couple key things we want to be able to say are:
>> - `Reference.reachabilityFence(x)` _happens-before_ reference processing 
>> occurs for 'x'.
>> - `Cleaner.register()` _happens-before_ the Cleaner thread runs the 
>> registered cleaning action.
>> 
>> This will bring Cleaner in line (or close) with the memory visibility 
>> guarantees made for finalizers in [JLS 
>> 17.4.5](https://docs.oracle.com/javase/specs/jls/se18/html/jls-17.html#jls-17.4.5):
>> _"There is a happens-before edge from the end of a constructor of an object 
>> to the start of a finalizer (§12.6) for that object."_
>
> Brent Christian has updated the pull request incrementally with one 
> additional commit since the last revision:
> 
>   small grammar fixes

src/java.base/share/classes/java/lang/ref/Cleaner.java line 224:

> 222:  * Actions in a thread prior to calling {@code Cleaner.register()}
> 223:  *  href="{@docRoot}/java.base/java/util/concurrent/package-summary.html#MemoryVisibility">happen-before
> 224:  * the cleaning action is run by the Cleaner's thread.

In passing, you could reduces the html refs to 
"package-summary.html#MemoryConsistency" and 
"package-summary.html#MemoryVisibility" as it's the same package/directory.

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PR Review Comment: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/16644#discussion_r159364


Re: RFR: 8314480: Memory ordering spec updates in java.lang.ref [v29]

2024-04-29 Thread Brent Christian
> Classes in the `java.lang.ref` package would benefit from an update to bring 
> the spec in line with how the VM already behaves. The changes would focus on 
> _happens-before_ edges at some key points during reference processing.
> 
> A couple key things we want to be able to say are:
> - `Reference.reachabilityFence(x)` _happens-before_ reference processing 
> occurs for 'x'.
> - `Cleaner.register()` _happens-before_ the Cleaner thread runs the 
> registered cleaning action.
> 
> This will bring Cleaner in line (or close) with the memory visibility 
> guarantees made for finalizers in [JLS 
> 17.4.5](https://docs.oracle.com/javase/specs/jls/se18/html/jls-17.html#jls-17.4.5):
> _"There is a happens-before edge from the end of a constructor of an object 
> to the start of a finalizer (§12.6) for that object."_

Brent Christian has updated the pull request incrementally with one additional 
commit since the last revision:

  small grammar fixes

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Changes:
  - all: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/16644/files
  - new: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/16644/files/5f90b5d8..a41e6fc2

Webrevs:
 - full: https://webrevs.openjdk.org/?repo=jdk=16644=28
 - incr: https://webrevs.openjdk.org/?repo=jdk=16644=27-28

  Stats: 3 lines in 1 file changed: 0 ins; 0 del; 3 mod
  Patch: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/16644.diff
  Fetch: git fetch https://git.openjdk.org/jdk.git pull/16644/head:pull/16644

PR: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/16644