Hi,
I am currently catching up with the last 6 months of development of
live-helper.
I discovered a nice manual is on its way. Thanks.
Chris Lamb [EMAIL PROTECTED] (2008-05-11 23:08:11) :
I recently starting putting together the beginnings of the Debian Live
manual. I have setup a simple autobuilder which is updated every hour:
http://alioth.debian.org/~lamby-guest/live-manual/
Please find attached a patch that simply consists in my first
reading of it. No addition of content yet. :)
Best regards,
Frédéric Lehobey
From a94707fbbdcc222ac5e31b384cefc05afb0da5cd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Frederic Daniel Luc Lehobey [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Date: Thu, 7 Aug 2008 04:33:47 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] * Correction of typos
* According to meta.xml, the character user for root is '#' (and not
'%') and '$' for user commands. Fixed several mismatches.
---
chapters/about.xml |6 ++--
chapters/basics.xml |2 +-
chapters/common-tasks.xml |2 +-
chapters/customisation-binary.xml |4 +-
chapters/customisation-bootup.xml |2 +-
chapters/customisation-contents.xml |4 +-
chapters/customisation-packages.xml |2 +-
chapters/installation.xml | 37 +++---
chapters/meta.xml |6 ++--
chapters/overview.xml | 12 +-
chapters/reporting-bugs.xml |2 +-
11 files changed, 42 insertions(+), 37 deletions(-)
diff --git a/chapters/about.xml b/chapters/about.xml
index d52965f..3ce9426 100644
--- a/chapters/about.xml
+++ b/chapters/about.xml
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
/para
para
- Exception: temporarly, our own packages like live-helper or live-initramfs may be used from our own repository for development reasons (e.g. to create development snapshots). They will be synced into Debian on a regular basis.
+ Exception: temporarily, our own packages like live-helper or live-initramfs may be used from our own repository for development reasons (e.g. to create development snapshots). They will be synced into Debian on a regular basis.
/para
/section
@@ -82,13 +82,13 @@
/section
section
-titleNo live system to hardisk installer/title
+titleNo live system to hard disk installer/title
para
[ this is no longer valid after etch release, we will work on an installer for lenny ]
/para
para
- For the moment we will not ship a installer to copy the live system to a partition on the hardisk. Although we keep the changes in the live system as drastically minimal as possible compared to a regular Debian installation, the live system does differ in a few essential points (see exceptions, guideline 2).
+ For the moment we will not ship an installer to copy the live system to a partition on the hard disk. Although we keep the changes in the live system as drastically minimal as possible compared to a regular Debian installation, the live system does differ in a few essential points (see exceptions, guideline 2).
/para
para
diff --git a/chapters/basics.xml b/chapters/basics.xml
index ca60fb0..27fbf0a 100644
--- a/chapters/basics.xml
+++ b/chapters/basics.xml
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ $ qemu -hda binary.img
/section
section
-titleBuilding an netboot image/title
+titleBuilding a netboot image/title
para
First, we configure our Live system:
diff --git a/chapters/common-tasks.xml b/chapters/common-tasks.xml
index 428ab6f..29aaf3e 100644
--- a/chapters/common-tasks.xml
+++ b/chapters/common-tasks.xml
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
section id=debian-installer
titleThe Debian Installer/title
para
- Although Debian Live is mostly concerned with avoiding permanent nstallation, integrating some form of installer to your image is possible. There are number of different types of installation, varying in what and how the install the image.
+ Although Debian Live is mostly concerned with avoiding permanent installation, integrating some form of installer to your image is possible. There are number of different types of installation, varying in what and how to install the image.
/para
note
title
diff --git a/chapters/customisation-binary.xml b/chapters/customisation-binary.xml
index 40876df..c7474b9 100644
--- a/chapters/customisation-binary.xml
+++ b/chapters/customisation-binary.xml
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
chapter id=binary
titleCustomising the binary image/title
-paraThis chapter discusses FIXME/para
+paraThis chapter discusses FIXME/para
section id=iso-metadata
titleISO metadata/title
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
termcomputeroutputLH_ISO_PREPARER/computeroutput / computeroutput--iso-preparer replaceableNAME/replaceable/computeroutput/term
listitem
para
-This should describe the preparer of the image, usually with some contect details. The default for this option is the live-helper; version you are using, which may help with debugging later. The maximum length for this field is 128 characters.
+This should describe the preparer of the image, usually with
