Re: The Debian Live manual

2008-08-07 Thread Chris Lamb
Frederic Lehobey wrote:


   Please find attached a patch that simply consists in my first
 reading of it.

Applied, many thanks. Please keep the patches coming! :)


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Re: The Debian Live manual

2008-08-07 Thread Daniel Baumann
Chris Lamb wrote:
 Applied, many thanks.

many thanks from me too ;)

 Please keep the patches coming! :)

yep, please do :) also, i don't remember why you're not commiting
directly to the alioth repositories. so, i've just added you.

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Re: The Debian Live manual

2008-08-06 Thread Frederic Lehobey
Hi,

  I am currently catching up with the last 6 months of development of
live-helper.

  I discovered a nice manual is on its way. Thanks.

Chris Lamb [EMAIL PROTECTED] (2008-05-11 23:08:11) :

 I recently starting putting together the beginnings of the Debian Live
 manual. I have setup a simple autobuilder which is updated every hour:
 
http://alioth.debian.org/~lamby-guest/live-manual/

  Please find attached a patch that simply consists in my first
reading of it. No addition of content yet.  :)

Best regards,
Frédéric Lehobey
From a94707fbbdcc222ac5e31b384cefc05afb0da5cd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Frederic Daniel Luc Lehobey [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Date: Thu, 7 Aug 2008 04:33:47 +0200
Subject: [PATCH]  * Correction of typos
  * According to meta.xml, the character user for root is '#' (and not
'%') and '$' for user commands. Fixed several mismatches.

---
 chapters/about.xml  |6 ++--
 chapters/basics.xml |2 +-
 chapters/common-tasks.xml   |2 +-
 chapters/customisation-binary.xml   |4 +-
 chapters/customisation-bootup.xml   |2 +-
 chapters/customisation-contents.xml |4 +-
 chapters/customisation-packages.xml |2 +-
 chapters/installation.xml   |   37 +++---
 chapters/meta.xml   |6 ++--
 chapters/overview.xml   |   12 +-
 chapters/reporting-bugs.xml |2 +-
 11 files changed, 42 insertions(+), 37 deletions(-)

diff --git a/chapters/about.xml b/chapters/about.xml
index d52965f..3ce9426 100644
--- a/chapters/about.xml
+++ b/chapters/about.xml
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
 /para
 
 para
- Exception: temporarly, our own packages like live-helper or live-initramfs may be used from our own repository for development reasons (e.g. to create development snapshots). They will be synced into Debian on a regular basis.
+ Exception: temporarily, our own packages like live-helper or live-initramfs may be used from our own repository for development reasons (e.g. to create development snapshots). They will be synced into Debian on a regular basis.
 /para
 /section
 
@@ -82,13 +82,13 @@
 /section
 
 section
-titleNo live system to hardisk installer/title
+titleNo live system to hard disk installer/title
 para
  [ this is no longer valid after etch release, we will work on an installer for lenny ]
 /para
 
 para
- For the moment we will not ship a installer to copy the live system to a partition on the hardisk. Although we keep the changes in the live system as drastically minimal as possible compared to a regular Debian installation, the live system does differ in a few essential points (see exceptions, guideline 2).
+ For the moment we will not ship an installer to copy the live system to a partition on the hard disk. Although we keep the changes in the live system as drastically minimal as possible compared to a regular Debian installation, the live system does differ in a few essential points (see exceptions, guideline 2).
 /para
 
 para
diff --git a/chapters/basics.xml b/chapters/basics.xml
index ca60fb0..27fbf0a 100644
--- a/chapters/basics.xml
+++ b/chapters/basics.xml
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ $ qemu -hda binary.img
 /section
 
 section
-titleBuilding an netboot image/title
+titleBuilding a netboot image/title
 
 para
  First, we configure our Live system:
diff --git a/chapters/common-tasks.xml b/chapters/common-tasks.xml
index 428ab6f..29aaf3e 100644
--- a/chapters/common-tasks.xml
+++ b/chapters/common-tasks.xml
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 section id=debian-installer
 titleThe Debian Installer/title
  para
-  Although Debian Live is mostly concerned with avoiding permanent nstallation, integrating some form of installer to your image is possible. There are number of different types of installation, varying in what and how the install the image.
+  Although Debian Live is mostly concerned with avoiding permanent installation, integrating some form of installer to your image is possible. There are number of different types of installation, varying in what and how to install the image.
  /para
  note
   title
diff --git a/chapters/customisation-binary.xml b/chapters/customisation-binary.xml
index 40876df..c7474b9 100644
--- a/chapters/customisation-binary.xml
+++ b/chapters/customisation-binary.xml
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 chapter id=binary
 titleCustomising the binary image/title
 
-paraThis chapter discusses FIXME/para
+paraThis chapter discusses FIXME/para
 
 section id=iso-metadata
  titleISO metadata/title
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
   termcomputeroutputLH_ISO_PREPARER/computeroutput / computeroutput--iso-preparer replaceableNAME/replaceable/computeroutput/term
   listitem
para
-This should describe the preparer of the image, usually with some contect details. The default for this option is the live-helper; version you are using, which may help with debugging later. The maximum length for this field is 128 characters.
+This should describe the preparer of the image, usually with 

Re: The Debian Live manual

2008-05-19 Thread Kai Hendry
On Mon, May 19, 2008 at 12:44 AM, Trent W. Buck [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
 One problem I have with my exiting ikiwiki/markdown knowledge bases is
 that markdown doesn't have a really solid, good-looking (via LaTeX)
 PDF output mechanism, meaning that you can't produce printed
 documentation.

You can produce great printed documentation from markdown  HTML with
something like http://princexml.com/

Basically a browser with good CSS print support. Which tbh isn't quite
'there' yet in our packaged browsers.

 Wikis are also non-linear, which also causes problems when you try to
 produce printed documentation (which is inherently linear).

Well, I think most people understand and like hyperlinks, even in
print mediums like PDF.

 Finally, docbook has good support for footnotes, endnotes, sidebars,
 appendices, lists of figures and tables, and (in recent versions, as
 an extension) some basic formula support.

So does MathML. Tbh I have not tried formulae out with PrinceXML.

 I hate editing anything without vim  git.
 You can edit docbook with vim and git; it's not docbook's fault if
 there's no nxml equivalent for vim ;-)

I was referring to http://wiki.debian.org/DebianLive/ here.

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Re: The Debian Live manual

2008-05-18 Thread Kai Hendry
I could imagine contributing more if it wasn't XML.

http://natalian.org/archives/2008/05/15/10-years-of-xml/

Why not markdown and a front end like ikiwiki?


I don't contribute much to http://wiki.debian.org/DebianLive/ because
I hate editing anything without vim  git.


Sorry to moan!

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Re: The Debian Live manual

2008-05-18 Thread Tzafrir Cohen
On Sun, May 18, 2008 at 07:48:50PM +0100, Kai Hendry wrote:
 I could imagine contributing more if it wasn't XML.
 
 http://natalian.org/archives/2008/05/15/10-years-of-xml/
 
 Why not markdown and a front end like ikiwiki?

Personally I prefer asciidoc. But I didn't start that document so I
don't get to dictate that.

 
 
 I don't contribute much to http://wiki.debian.org/DebianLive/ because
 I hate editing anything without vim  git.

That docuument is available for you to edit with vim and git. You, I
know that the syntax is sub-optimal.

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Re: The Debian Live manual

2008-05-18 Thread Trent W. Buck
On Sun, May 18, 2008 at 07:48:50PM +0100, Kai Hendry wrote:
 I could imagine contributing more if it wasn't XML.
 http://natalian.org/archives/2008/05/15/10-years-of-xml/
 Why not markdown and a front end like ikiwiki?

One problem I have with my exiting ikiwiki/markdown knowledge bases is
that markdown doesn't have a really solid, good-looking (via LaTeX)
PDF output mechanism, meaning that you can't produce printed
documentation.

Wikis are also non-linear, which also causes problems when you try to
produce printed documentation (which is inherently linear).

Finally, docbook has good support for footnotes, endnotes, sidebars,
appendices, lists of figures and tables, and (in recent versions, as
an extension) some basic formula support.

 I hate editing anything without vim  git.

You can edit docbook with vim and git; it's not docbook's fault if
there's no nxml equivalent for vim ;-)

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Re: The Debian Live manual

2008-05-17 Thread Marco Amadori
Alle Monday 12 May 2008, Chris Lamb ha scritto:
 Chris Lamb wrote:
  The manual itself is in DocBook format and is stored in Git:

Great idea and really a good initial work.

Thanks for that Chris.

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Re: The Debian Live manual

2008-05-12 Thread Otavio Salvador
Chris Lamb [EMAIL PROTECTED] writes:

 Hi,

 I recently starting putting together the beginnings of the Debian Live
 manual. I have setup a simple autobuilder which is updated every hour:

I've done a fast looking at it but I _most_ say that it rocks. This
will make much easier for people to report issues and use live-helper.

Congratulations to all involved people.

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Re: The Debian Live manual

2008-05-11 Thread Chris Lamb
Chris Lamb wrote:

 The manual itself is in DocBook format and is stored in Git:
 
% git clone git://git.debian.org/debian-live/live-manual

This should be 

   % git clone git://git.debian.org/git/debian-live/live-manual.git


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