[OPSAWG] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-11

2024-04-20 Thread Wesley Eddy via Datatracker
Reviewer: Wesley Eddy Review result: Ready This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG to allow them

[OPSAWG] Tsvart early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-05

2024-01-02 Thread Wesley Eddy via Datatracker
Reviewer: Wesley Eddy Review result: Ready with Issues Comments: - The document is well-written and easy to read. - Section 6 is really nice and helpful! Issues: - The way an implementation understands the TCP ExIDs may benefit from slightly more explanation: -- In 4.2 and 4.3, is the idea

[alto] Iotdir telechat review of draft-ietf-alto-new-transport-17

2023-10-23 Thread Wesley Eddy via Datatracker
Reviewer: Wesley Eddy Review result: Ready with Issues I only found 1 real "issue" in reading this document, and a few smaller nits, described below. None of these comments are specifically related to IoTDIR type of concerns, and it doesn't seem like the protocol would be intended for use in

[spring] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-spring-sr-replication-segment-14

2023-06-16 Thread Wesley Eddy via Datatracker
Reviewer: Wesley Eddy Review result: Almost Ready This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG to

[bess] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-lsp-ping-08

2022-10-09 Thread Wesley Eddy via Datatracker
Reviewer: Wesley Eddy Review result: Ready This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG to allow them

[OPSAWG] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-09

2021-07-30 Thread Wesley Eddy via Datatracker
Reviewer: Wesley Eddy Review result: Ready with Issues This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG

[OPSAWG] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-06

2021-03-30 Thread Wesley Eddy via Datatracker
Reviewer: Wesley Eddy Review result: Almost Ready This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG to