Hi Russ,
Thanks for your review and comments.
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Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Thanks Reese,
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
All comments accepted and addressed except...
> Please consider redrawing the figures using SVG instead of ASCII.
> Especially Figure 4 would greatly benefit from this enhancement.
I think Figure is about as complex as they get, and
Reviewer: Reese Enghardt
Review result: Ready with Nits
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