[OPSAWG] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-09

2021-07-30 Thread Wesley Eddy via Datatracker
Reviewer: Wesley Eddy Review result: Ready with Issues This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG

[OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-09

2021-07-30 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For