Package: eclipse-rcp
Version: 3.7.2-1
Severity: minor
The extended description ends with:
This package includes Eclipse Rich Client Platform (RCP), which is the
basis upon other Eclipse-based applications are built.
There is something wrong in "which is the basis upon other Eclipse-based
applications are built". This should either read "which is the basis
other Eclipse-based applications are built upon" or "the basis upon
which other Eclipse-based applications are built".
By the way, I do not think the RCP is an Eclipse application. I suggest:
This package includes the Eclipse Rich Client Platform (RCP), the basis
upon which Eclipse RCP applications are built.
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