Dear Jianqiang HOU. Thanks for your comments.
See my response in line. Best regards. Yong-Geun. On Wed, Jan 18, 2017 at 4:10 PM, houjianqiang <houjianqi...@huawei.com> wrote: > Hi Yong-Geun, > > > > Your draft ietf-6lo-use-cases gives an elaborated text on applicable user > scenarios for 6lo which is very helpful in industrial deployment. Other > than the technologies listed in current draft, I would suggest to include > PLC (Power Line Communication) as well. PLC uses electric power lines as > the medium for indoor and outdoor communications and is a good candidate > for supporting Smart Grid, Advanced Metering Infrastructure (AMI) and Smart > Street Lighting. 6lo is applicable to it. We have some PLC based > deployment. I am about to write some text regarding this case and may send > you in a separate email if there is interest. > [Yong-Geun] Yes, I believe that the PLC is a candidate of 6lo technologies and there was an related internet draft of IPv6 over PLC(draft-popa-6lo-6loplc-ipv6-over-ieee19012-networks). And there were similar comments of yours from Take Aanstoot. I agree 6lo is applicable to it. If you suggests some relevant texts, it could be integrated. And then let's discuss further. > > > Other editorial comments as follows. Thanks. > > > > *Change some subsection titles * > > 3.1. title: better use “Short Range Narrow-band Digital > Radiocommunication” or abbreviation > > 3.7. title: better use “Timeslotted Channer Hopping” or “TSCH” > > This subsection titles in section 3 are a bit confusing in that some are > communication technologies while the others are names of standard protocols > (ITU-T G.9959, IEEE 802.15.4e). > > > > *Unify the subtitle abbreviation* > > 3.2. title: “Bluetooth Low Energy” => “Bluetooth LE” > > 3.4. title: “Master-Slave/Token-Passing” => “MS/TP” > > Unify the titles of subsections either in full names or in abbreviations. > [Yong-Geun] Thanks. I will reflect your comments in a next revision. > > > Best regards, > > Jianqiang HOU >
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