I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-6man-text-addr-representation-04 Reviewer: David L. Black Review Date: February 2, 2010 IESG Telechat date: February 4, 2010 Summary: This draft is on the right track, but has open issues, described in the review. Comments: The draft provides recommendations for a canonical format for IPv6 addresses. The open issue is that the draft only provides recommendations, and does not tightly specify a canonical format. A tight specification of a canonical format would include at least one (and preferably both) of: - An algorithm to test whether an IPv6 text address is in the canonical format - An algorithm to convert an IPv6 text address into canonical form. Code or pseudo-code should be used, and note that the latter item subsumes the former (a canonicalization algorithm makes no changes to input that's already in the canonical format). In the absence of these elements, I'm not convinced that the draft defines an interoperable standard that solves the problem. This document is a good start - I think it's a fine requirements document that would be appropriate to publish as an Informational RFC, but I believe that more work is needed to produce a standards-track RFC that specifies an interoperable representation. If this document is published in its current form, it should be edited slightly to make it clear that it is only a requirements document. Thanks, --David ---------------------------------------------------- David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 black_da...@emc.com Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 ---------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------- IETF IPv6 working group mailing list ipv6@ietf.org Administrative Requests: https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipv6 --------------------------------------------------------------------