On 02/25/10 00:10, Antonio Querubin wrote: > On Mon, 22 Feb 2010, Brian E Carpenter wrote: > >> I think it's out of scope of a *protocol* standard. However, I think Doug >> has a valid point, so maybe we should add an explicit statement that >> the document defines what should be transmitted and presented to humans, >> but does not define internal storage within an application or database. > > The abstract and introduction seemed to already imply this but how about > > s/This document also recommends a canonical representation format that > best avoids confusion./To avoid confusion this document recommends a > canonical text presentation format but does not define internal storage > formats within an application or database./
I like the idea, but IMO it's a little too redundant and repetitive. :) I thought some of Brian's wording was good, and some of yours, and I think that mentioning explicitly what IS first is a good idea. Something like: This document defines a representation format for transmission and presentation to humans. It does not define a format for internal storage, such as within an application or database. Sound good? Doug -- ... and that's just a little bit of history repeating. -- Propellerheads Improve the effectiveness of your Internet presence with a domain name makeover! http://SupersetSolutions.com/ -------------------------------------------------------------------- IETF IPv6 working group mailing list ipv6@ietf.org Administrative Requests: https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipv6 --------------------------------------------------------------------