ropers wrote: > Feel free to reject the below without comment if these changes are not > deemed improvements:
Thanks! I just incorporated a couple of these. I'll look through the rest soon. > --- faq4.html.orig 2015-12-20 21:56:34.565914000 +0100 > +++ faq4.html 2015-12-21 23:33:22.311786584 +0100 > @@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ > <h2 id="Overview">4.1 - Overview of the OpenBSD installation procedure</h2> > > <p> > -OpenBSD has long been respected for its simple and straight forward > +OpenBSD has long been respected for its simple and straightforward > installation process, which is very consistent across all platforms. > > <p> > @@ -131,8 +131,8 @@ > boot</a>). > > <li><b>Writing a file system image to disk (miniroot):</b> > -Typically, these are written to a USB device to boot up the install > -kernel. > +Here, either <tt>installXX.fs</tt> or <tt>minirootXX.fs</tt> is written > +to—typically—a USB device to boot up the install kernel. > > </ul> > > @@ -666,9 +666,10 @@ > common passwords people think are really clever. > > <p> > -You will later be given a chance to create an administrative account and > -disable remote (SSH) access to the root account, but you still want a > -good password on your root account. > +You will later be given a chance to create an administrative account. > +If you create one, you will be asked—and the default will > be—to > +disable remote (SSH) access to the root account, but regardless of your > +choices, you still want a good password on your root account. > > <p> > <table border=0 width="90%"><tr><td nowrap bgcolor="#EEEEEE"><pre> > @@ -1626,7 +1627,7 @@ > > <p> > All partitions which have native FFS partitions on them should be within > -the OpenBSD fdisk(8) partition, however > +their drive's OpenBSD fdisk(8) partition, however > <a href="faq14.html#foreignfs">non-OpenBSD</a> partitions can (and > usually should) be outside the OpenBSD fdisk partition. > > @@ -1635,8 +1636,8 @@ > <a href="faq14.html#disklabel">here</a>. > > <p> > -More information on why partitioning is beneficial and strategy for > -creating a good partitioning plan are <a href="#Partitioning">below</a>. > +More information on why partitioning is beneficial and a strategy for > +creating a good partitioning plan is found <a > href="#Partitioning">below</a>. > > <p> > The OpenBSD installer will attempt to auto-partition your
