On Tue, 2012-06-05 at 23:02 +0530, Manu Gupta wrote: > Seems like Jos already had an article readily published, please have a > look at it and if its ready to be published I or anyone else can do > it. > > http://news.opensuse.org/?p=13300&preview=true >
Looks good to me, but I would rewrite the first sentence to say > After a few delayed milestones, the fourth even got canceled since > there have been quite a number of disruptive changes in our Factory > development distribution, but we’re starting to settle down and > announce the availability of Beta 1 today! instead of > After a few delayed milestones, the fourth even got canceled – there > has been quite a number of disruptive changes in our Factor > development distribution! But we’re starting to settle down and > announce the availability of Beta 1 today! -- Marcel Kühlhorn freenode: tux93 Have a lot of fun!
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