The synopsis uses passive voice; <.....> is called TAP. Id turn that around.
TAP, the Test Anything Protocol, is .....
Fixed, thanks.
Everything else reads fine.
Id like to see Description replaced by Remarks, but maybe that fish is already fried.
Battered, fried, slathered with tartar sauce and lemon, and eaten, along with cole slaw and corn fritters, by a hungry guy from Wisconsin.
xoxo, Andy
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