Re: [E] Re: [ODL Discuss] New webpage review

2023-08-24 Thread Mohit Saini 
Hi All,

I wanted to give you all a quick update on the recent changes we've made to
the Network Resources Optimization (NRO) page and footer.

1. The word Company and Social Media has been replaced with Resources &
Links.
2. The NRO page structure, and all the grammar issues have been taken care
of.
3. We are now using the same font for the whole website.

Our design proposals have received approval from the marketing and creative
services team. This means we're ready to dive into the next step:
finalizing the technical stack for the website. I look forward to
discussing this in the TSC meeting.


On Sun, 13 Aug 2023 at 05:53, David Arjona via lists.opendaylight.org
 wrote:

> Hi Everybody,
>
> I took a look at the Network Resources Optimization page and I am sending
> you the following comments. Please note that English is not my first
> language, so It would be nice if a native speaker verifies my comments:
>
> 1. Challenges, 1st paragraph: I believe "it's" is informal and should be
> replaced with "it is".
>
> 2. Challenges, 3rd p.: There are many repeated words in this single
> paragraph (operators, existing, infrastructure, leveraging). I propose the
> following rewriting:
> Few operators have the luxury to be able to start from scratch. *They*
> have invested significant amounts of money in their existing
> *infrastructure* and therefore need to evolve and manage this over time
> while leveraging massive investments in *their networks*. Viable Network
> Resource Optimization solutions, therefore, need to *allow* operators to
> obtain more out of their existing *installation* while *adding* new
> innovations as they become *available*.
>
> 3. Why OpenDaylight, 1st p.: "Large enterprises" instead of "Large
> enterprise". Also, any of the following words is missing in the phrase that
> says "across *an/any* heterogeneous infrastructure".
>
> 4. Why OpenDaylight, 1st bullet: This bullet paragraph finishes with
> "underlying devices to readily support", but it is not clear what it is
> being supported. It seems that something is missing at the end.
>
> 5. Tencent Data Center Interconnect, 1st p.: replace "in the highly
> competitive consumer space" with "in *a* highly competitive consumer
> space".
>
> 6. The headers for China Mobile Novonet, Ericsson SDN controller and HPE
> Context Net do not have the correct format.
>
> In general, I believe the examples in the "Examples|End Users" section are
> very brief and do not explain how these enterprises are employing
> OpenDaylight to improve network performance or management. I know this is
> private information, but it would be nice to have a brief explanation of
> where or how each company has used ODL.
>
> Regards,
>
> David
> 
>
>

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Re: [E] Re: [ODL Discuss] New webpage review

2023-08-12 Thread David Arjona via lists.opendaylight.org 
Hi Everybody,

I took a look at the Network Resources Optimization page and I am sending you 
the following comments. Please note that English is not my first language, so 
It would be nice if a native speaker verifies my comments:

1. Challenges, 1st paragraph: I believe "it's" is informal and should be 
replaced with "it is".

2. Challenges, 3rd p.: There are many repeated words in this single paragraph 
(operators, existing, infrastructure, leveraging). I propose the following 
rewriting:
Few operators have the luxury to be able to start from scratch. *They* have 
invested significant amounts of money in their existing *infrastructure* and 
therefore need to evolve and manage this over time while leveraging massive 
investments in *their networks*. Viable Network Resource Optimization 
solutions, therefore, need to *allow* operators to obtain more out of their 
existing *installation* while *adding* new innovations as they become 
*available*.

3. Why OpenDaylight, 1st p.: "Large enterprises" instead of "Large enterprise". 
Also, any of the following words is missing in the phrase that says "across 
*an/any* heterogeneous infrastructure".

4. Why OpenDaylight, 1st bullet: This bullet paragraph finishes with 
"underlying devices to readily support", but it is not clear what it is being 
supported. It seems that something is missing at the end.

5. Tencent Data Center Interconnect, 1st p.: replace "in the highly competitive 
consumer space" with "in *a* highly competitive consumer space".

6. The headers for China Mobile Novonet, Ericsson SDN controller and HPE 
Context Net do not have the correct format.

In general, I believe the examples in the "Examples|End Users" section are very 
brief and do not explain how these enterprises are employing OpenDaylight to 
improve network performance or management. I know this is private information, 
but it would be nice to have a brief explanation of where or how each company 
has used ODL.

Regards,

David


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Re: [E] Re: [ODL Discuss] New webpage review

2023-08-10 Thread Casey Cain 
I think it's a good idea to remove any X/Twitter social media pages or at
least redirect them to the LFN account. While there isn't a specific plan
to join Mastodon at the moment, we are still discussing our options for
social media.I think it's a good idea to remove any X/Twitter social media
pages or at least redirect them to the LFN account. While there isn't a
specific plan to join Mastodon at the moment, we are still discussing our
options for social media.

Best,
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Linux Foundation
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On Thu, Aug 10, 2023 at 10:34 AM Ha, Sangwook 
wrote:

> Hi Mohit and Casey,
>
> Here are a few comments on the web page mockup:
>
>- There are so many different fonts & design styles (e.g. text boxes)
>used across the pages - this almost makes me feel like I'm visiting
>different sites, not different pages of a single site
>- In the footer there are two columns:
>   - Company: this title doesn't make sense since it's not a company
>   website.
>   - Our Social Media: Gerrit is not a social media. And I also wonder
>   whether we want to keep Twitter there since we don't have any control 
> over
>   the account. And also it's not Twitter any more - it would be nice if 
> Linux
>   Foundation has its own Mastodon instance and OpenDaylight has an account
>   hosted there.
>- In the Platform Overview page there is a mention of ALTO, Group
>Based Policy and Network Intent Composition but these projects are not
>active any more. And there is a mention of Maven - "OpenDaylight uses OSGi
>and Maven to build a package ..." and this doesn't seem to fit in this
>architecture summary
>
> Thanks,
> Sangwook
>
> On Thu, Aug 10, 2023 at 9:56 AM Mohit Saini  wrote:
>
>> Hi,
>>
>> All concerns have been addressed except for the testimonials text labeled
>> as [Number 8]. It would be greatly appreciated if Verizon and Pantheon tech
>> could furnish us with some testimonials. Additionally, I believe you should
>> also be able to observe the Release, Total commits, and Committer dialog
>> box in light mode, as we have not come across any issues with it. However,
>> if you're unable to view it, kindly inform me.
>>
>> On Thu, 20 Jul 2023 at 20:09, Ivan Hrasko 
>> wrote:
>>
>>> Hi,
>>>
>>> the netconf team has the following comments to the new ODL web page
>>> available at:
>>> https://wiki.opendaylight.org/display/ODL/Figma+Design%27s+For+OpenDaylight
>>> 
>>>
>>> 1. ABOUT PAGE DESKTOP - WHAT IS SDN
>>>
>>> Last sentence right column “ODL is the by far the largest…”  (The
>>> first “the” should not be there)
>>>
>>> 2. USER STORIES DESKTOP
>>>
>>> “How we can help your Succeed!“ → should be “How we can help you
>>> succeed!” (without capital S and with “you”)
>>>
>>> 3. GETTING STARTED DESKTOP - RESOURCES
>>>
>>> The heading says “GitHub”, but the link goes to Gerrit
>>>
>>> Project - “We have lot of things going on at ODL” → Use either “a
>>> lot of” or “lots of”
>>>
>>> 4. NRO DARK DESKTOP - MULTI-LAYER TRANSPORT CONTROLLER SOLUTIONS
>>>
>>> The heading “MULTI-LAYER TRANSPORT CONTROLLER SOLUTIONS” is black on
>>> a dark background → based on the theme it should be orange
>>>
>>> 5. In dark theme is OpenDaylight logo invisible
>>>
>>> 6. In dark theme is missing ODL logo in footer
>>>
>>> 7. Governance desktop:
>>> Members of TSC would deserve having their names written with full
>>> diacritics - Ivan Hraško instead of Hrasko. Same for Robert Varga.
>>>
>>> 8. User Stories desktop:
>>>  - Section: Our testimonials
>>> Both Verizon and Pantheon tech have the same quote associated with
>>> them
>>>
>>> 9. Footers: Bump up the year to 2023
>>>
>>> 10. Release, Total commits, Commiter dialog is not visible in light mode
>>>
>>> 11. Learn more about LFN should be a link
>>>
>>> 12. Learn how to get started with OpenDaylight as a developer should be
>>> a link
>>>
>>> 13. (Training) LFS 465 course link is not clickable
>>>
>>> 14. (Our testimonials) Phanteon Tech -> PANTHEON.tech
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Best,
>>> --
>>>
>>> *Ivan Hraško*
>>>
>>> Senior Software Engineer
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> *PANTHEON* *.tech*
>>>
>>> Mlynské Nivy 56, 821 05 Bratislava
>>>
>>> Slovakia
>>>
>>> Tel / +421 220 665 111
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> *MAIL **/* ivan.hra...@pantheon.team
>>>
>>> *WEB **/* https://pantheon.tech
>>>

Re: [E] Re: [ODL Discuss] New webpage review

2023-08-10 Thread Sangwook Ha via lists.opendaylight.org 
Hi Mohit and Casey,

Here are a few comments on the web page mockup:

   - There are so many different fonts & design styles (e.g. text boxes)
   used across the pages - this almost makes me feel like I'm visiting
   different sites, not different pages of a single site
   - In the footer there are two columns:
  - Company: this title doesn't make sense since it's not a company
  website.
  - Our Social Media: Gerrit is not a social media. And I also wonder
  whether we want to keep Twitter there since we don't have any
control over
  the account. And also it's not Twitter any more - it would be
nice if Linux
  Foundation has its own Mastodon instance and OpenDaylight has an account
  hosted there.
   - In the Platform Overview page there is a mention of ALTO, Group Based
   Policy and Network Intent Composition but these projects are not active any
   more. And there is a mention of Maven - "OpenDaylight uses OSGi and Maven
   to build a package ..." and this doesn't seem to fit in this architecture
   summary

Thanks,
Sangwook

On Thu, Aug 10, 2023 at 9:56 AM Mohit Saini  wrote:

> Hi,
>
> All concerns have been addressed except for the testimonials text labeled
> as [Number 8]. It would be greatly appreciated if Verizon and Pantheon tech
> could furnish us with some testimonials. Additionally, I believe you should
> also be able to observe the Release, Total commits, and Committer dialog
> box in light mode, as we have not come across any issues with it. However,
> if you're unable to view it, kindly inform me.
>
> On Thu, 20 Jul 2023 at 20:09, Ivan Hrasko 
> wrote:
>
>> Hi,
>>
>> the netconf team has the following comments to the new ODL web page
>> available at:
>> https://wiki.opendaylight.org/display/ODL/Figma+Design%27s+For+OpenDaylight
>> 
>>
>> 1. ABOUT PAGE DESKTOP - WHAT IS SDN
>>
>> Last sentence right column “ODL is the by far the largest…”  (The
>> first “the” should not be there)
>>
>> 2. USER STORIES DESKTOP
>>
>> “How we can help your Succeed!“ → should be “How we can help you
>> succeed!” (without capital S and with “you”)
>>
>> 3. GETTING STARTED DESKTOP - RESOURCES
>>
>> The heading says “GitHub”, but the link goes to Gerrit
>>
>> Project - “We have lot of things going on at ODL” → Use either “a lot
>> of” or “lots of”
>>
>> 4. NRO DARK DESKTOP - MULTI-LAYER TRANSPORT CONTROLLER SOLUTIONS
>>
>> The heading “MULTI-LAYER TRANSPORT CONTROLLER SOLUTIONS” is black on
>> a dark background → based on the theme it should be orange
>>
>> 5. In dark theme is OpenDaylight logo invisible
>>
>> 6. In dark theme is missing ODL logo in footer
>>
>> 7. Governance desktop:
>> Members of TSC would deserve having their names written with full
>> diacritics - Ivan Hraško instead of Hrasko. Same for Robert Varga.
>>
>> 8. User Stories desktop:
>>  - Section: Our testimonials
>> Both Verizon and Pantheon tech have the same quote associated with
>> them
>>
>> 9. Footers: Bump up the year to 2023
>>
>> 10. Release, Total commits, Commiter dialog is not visible in light mode
>>
>> 11. Learn more about LFN should be a link
>>
>> 12. Learn how to get started with OpenDaylight as a developer should be a
>> link
>>
>> 13. (Training) LFS 465 course link is not clickable
>>
>> 14. (Our testimonials) Phanteon Tech -> PANTHEON.tech
>>
>>
>>
>> Best,
>> --
>>
>> *Ivan Hraško*
>>
>> Senior Software Engineer
>>
>>
>>
>> *PANTHEON* *.tech*
>>
>> Mlynské Nivy 56, 821 05 Bratislava
>>
>> Slovakia
>>
>> Tel / +421 220 665 111
>>
>>
>>
>> *MAIL **/* ivan.hra...@pantheon.team
>>
>> *WEB **/* https://pantheon.tech
>> 
>>
>>
>
> --
> Best,
> Mohit Saini
> The Intern
> Linux Foundation
> _
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> 
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