cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2012-04-03 Thread Glen Barber
gjb 2012-04-03 13:27:00 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Remove references to dual-booot troubleshooting that does not exist. Submitted by: ryusuke Revision ChangesPath 1.31 +2 -3

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2012-02-13 Thread Warren Block
wblock 2012-02-13 15:12:50 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Fix miscapitalized word. Noticed by: ryusuke Revision ChangesPath 1.30 +1 -1 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdin

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2012-02-05 Thread Warren Block
wblock 2012-02-05 23:22:35 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Add a tip to the memory stick section pointing out that 8.2 uses a different FTP path and has a separate installation chapter. Revision Chang

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2012-01-31 Thread Warren Block
wblock 2012-01-31 17:55:59 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Remove border from partition schemes table. Add example of setting up a split-filesystem partition layout. Revision ChangesPath 1.27

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2012-01-28 Thread Warren Block
wblock 2012-01-29 00:16:47 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Fix title capitalizations, include /tmp in list of filesystems for split-filesystem partitioning. Revision ChangesPath 1.26 +3 -3

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2012-01-28 Thread Warren Block
wblock 2012-01-28 19:21:29 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Whitespace-only changes. Wrap long lines, fix indentation. Revision ChangesPath 1.25 +828 -678 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2012-01-04 Thread Benedict Reuschling
bcr 2012-01-04 13:42:27 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: A few updates found while translating: - add   between number and unit - move a sentence stop out of an ulink description - use &windows; in

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-12-09 Thread Ryusuke SUZUKI
ryusuke 2011-12-09 12:41:09 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: A link to the installation media is changed to a more appropriate page. (&url.base;/releases/index.html -> &url.base;/where.html) Reviewed by:

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-19 Thread Warren Block
wblock 2011-10-20 03:08:42 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Move PPC boot command outside of preceding paragraph for consistent formatting. Approved by:gjb (mentor) Revision ChangesPath

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-19 Thread Warren Block
wblock 2011-10-20 02:30:32 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Add details about the origin of bsdinstall and point out that bsdinstall is not pc-sysinstall. Noticed by: bcr (mentor), dru Discussed w

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-16 Thread Warren Block
wblock 2011-10-17 04:04:50 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Clarify that interface selection screen may show more than one interface. Approved by:gjb (mentor) Revision ChangesPath 1.17

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-13 Thread Manolis Kiagias
manolis 2011-10-13 23:43:52 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Add missing and tags Revision ChangesPath 1.16 +2 -1 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.sgml

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-13 Thread Manolis Kiagias
manolis 2011-10-13 18:29:12 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Fix two nits found during translation Revision ChangesPath 1.15 +2 -2 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.sg

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-13 Thread Glen Barber
On 10/10/11 1:29 PM, Glen Barber wrote: > gjb 2011-10-10 17:29:26 UTC > > FreeBSD doc repository > > Modified files: > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml > Log: > Use two spaces between end of sentence and beginning of sentence. > > Revision Changes

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-13 Thread John Baldwin
On Wednesday, October 12, 2011 12:41:01 pm Ulrich Spörlein wrote: > On Wed, 2011-10-12 at 09:41:17 -0400, Glen Barber wrote: > > On 10/12/11 9:37 AM, Niclas Zeising wrote: > > > On 10/12/11 15:31, Glen Barber wrote: > > >> On 10/12/11 9:27 AM, Ulrich Spörlein wrote: > > >>> On Mon, 2011-10-10 at 17

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-12 Thread Hiroki Sato
Benedict Reuschling wrote in <4e95ca78.6040...@freebsd.org>: bc> I propose that once we decide to use just one single space in the bc> future, that new documents which are added to the doc tree should use bc> this new convention, but old documents should not be changed. This bc> reduces the amo

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-12 Thread Mark Linimon
On Wed, Oct 12, 2011 at 07:12:24PM +0200, Benedict Reuschling wrote: > I do not find a single email in my work email nor in FreeBSD emails > from users of all ages that use two spaces, either. You must never have read any of my emails :-) mcl ___ cvs-al

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-12 Thread Ulrich Spörlein
On Wed, 2011-10-12 at 19:12:24 +0200, Benedict Reuschling wrote: > Am 12.10.11 18:41, schrieb Ulrich Spörlein: > > On Wed, 2011-10-12 at 09:41:17 -0400, Glen Barber wrote: > >> On 10/12/11 9:37 AM, Niclas Zeising wrote: > >>> On 10/12/11 15:31, Glen Barber wrote: > On 10/12/11 9:27 AM, Ulrich

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-12 Thread Benedict Reuschling
-BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE- Hash: SHA1 Am 12.10.11 21:11, schrieb Warner Losh: > > On Oct 12, 2011, at 11:12 AM, Benedict Reuschling wrote: >> Your thoughts on this? > > Two spaces are the one true way. It has been that way for a very long time. > These articles are much like the recur

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-12 Thread Marc Fonvieille
On Wed, Oct 12, 2011 at 07:12:24PM +0200, Benedict Reuschling wrote: > -BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE- > Hash: SHA1 > > Am 12.10.11 18:41, schrieb Ulrich Spörlein: > > On Wed, 2011-10-12 at 09:41:17 -0400, Glen Barber wrote: > >> On 10/12/11 9:37 AM, Niclas Zeising wrote: > >>> On 10/12/11 15:3

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-12 Thread Warner Losh
On Oct 12, 2011, at 11:12 AM, Benedict Reuschling wrote: > Your thoughts on this? Two spaces are the one true way. It has been that way for a very long time. These articles are much like the recursive make considered harmful articles. Or those crazy people that think that the caps lock belon

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-12 Thread Benedict Reuschling
-BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE- Hash: SHA1 Am 12.10.11 18:41, schrieb Ulrich Spörlein: > On Wed, 2011-10-12 at 09:41:17 -0400, Glen Barber wrote: >> On 10/12/11 9:37 AM, Niclas Zeising wrote: >>> On 10/12/11 15:31, Glen Barber wrote: On 10/12/11 9:27 AM, Ulrich Spörlein wrote: > On Mon

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-12 Thread Warren Block
wblock 2011-10-12 16:50:48 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Improve clarity and detail in bsdinstall wireless section. Approved by:gjb (mentor) Revision ChangesPath 1.14 +18 -14 d

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-12 Thread Ulrich Spörlein
On Wed, 2011-10-12 at 09:41:17 -0400, Glen Barber wrote: > On 10/12/11 9:37 AM, Niclas Zeising wrote: > > On 10/12/11 15:31, Glen Barber wrote: > >> On 10/12/11 9:27 AM, Ulrich Spörlein wrote: > >>> On Mon, 2011-10-10 at 17:29:26 +, Glen Barber wrote: > gjb 2011-10-10 17:29:26 UTC

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-12 Thread Glen Barber
On 10/12/11 9:45 AM, Manolis Kiagias wrote: > On 12/10/2011 4:31 μμ, Glen Barber wrote: >> On 10/12/11 9:27 AM, Ulrich Spörlein wrote: >>> On Mon, 2011-10-10 at 17:29:26 +, Glen Barber wrote: gjb 2011-10-10 17:29:26 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified file

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-12 Thread Manolis Kiagias
On 12/10/2011 4:31 μμ, Glen Barber wrote: On 10/12/11 9:27 AM, Ulrich Spörlein wrote: On Mon, 2011-10-10 at 17:29:26 +, Glen Barber wrote: gjb 2011-10-10 17:29:26 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log:

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-12 Thread Glen Barber
On 10/12/11 9:37 AM, Niclas Zeising wrote: > On 10/12/11 15:31, Glen Barber wrote: >> On 10/12/11 9:27 AM, Ulrich Spörlein wrote: >>> On Mon, 2011-10-10 at 17:29:26 +, Glen Barber wrote: gjb 2011-10-10 17:29:26 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: >>

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-12 Thread Niclas Zeising
On 10/12/11 15:31, Glen Barber wrote: On 10/12/11 9:27 AM, Ulrich Spörlein wrote: On Mon, 2011-10-10 at 17:29:26 +, Glen Barber wrote: gjb 2011-10-10 17:29:26 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Us

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-12 Thread Glen Barber
On 10/12/11 9:27 AM, Ulrich Spörlein wrote: > On Mon, 2011-10-10 at 17:29:26 +, Glen Barber wrote: >> gjb 2011-10-10 17:29:26 UTC >> >> FreeBSD doc repository >> >> Modified files: >> en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml >> Log: >> Use two spaces between e

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-12 Thread Ulrich Spörlein
On Mon, 2011-10-10 at 17:29:26 +, Glen Barber wrote: > gjb 2011-10-10 17:29:26 UTC > > FreeBSD doc repository > > Modified files: > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml > Log: > Use two spaces between end of sentence and beginning of sentence. > > R

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-10 Thread Glen Barber
gjb 2011-10-11 01:03:39 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Prefer to use ' ' in guibutton tags where spaces are necessary. (A few I missed earlier today.) Revision ChangesPath 1.12 +2 -2

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-10 Thread Glen Barber
gjb 2011-10-11 00:53:15 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Add a closing bracket to a guibutton tag. Submitted by: danger (via irc) Revision ChangesPath 1.11 +1 -1 doc/en

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-10 Thread Glen Barber
gjb 2011-10-11 00:51:55 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Unwrap a long line (whitespace only): - Though literal FTP links in the documentation look ugly, the long lines are necessary because linebreak

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-10 Thread Glen Barber
gjb 2011-10-10 17:29:26 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Use two spaces between end of sentence and beginning of sentence. Revision ChangesPath 1.9 +10 -10 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/ha

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-10 Thread Glen Barber
gjb 2011-10-10 17:27:47 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Use ' ' in place of spaces in guibutton tags. Revision ChangesPath 1.8 +1 -1 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/ch

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-10 Thread Glen Barber
gjb 2011-10-10 14:55:47 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Whitespace fixes: - Don't separate an opening parenthesis with a line break (it causes the output to contain a space between the parenthesis an

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-09 Thread Glen Barber
On 10/9/11 9:47 PM, Glen Barber wrote: > On 10/9/11 8:37 PM, Gabor Kovesdan wrote: >> On 2011.10.09. 19:32, Glen Barber wrote: >>> Consistent pre-populated commit messages: Another reason conversion to >>> SVN would be a "Good Thing(Tm).":-) >> What's wrong with the current template? What does SVN

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-09 Thread Glen Barber
On 10/9/11 8:37 PM, Gabor Kovesdan wrote: > On 2011.10.09. 19:32, Glen Barber wrote: >> Consistent pre-populated commit messages: Another reason conversion to >> SVN would be a "Good Thing(Tm).":-) > What's wrong with the current template? What does SVN do better? No > criticism, just curiosity be

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-09 Thread Gabor Kovesdan
On 2011.10.09. 19:32, Glen Barber wrote: Consistent pre-populated commit messages: Another reason conversion to SVN would be a "Good Thing(Tm).":-) What's wrong with the current template? What does SVN do better? No criticism, just curiosity because I haven't noticed any difference. Gabor ___

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-09 Thread Glen Barber
On 10/9/11 1:03 PM, Warren Block wrote: > wblock 2011-10-09 17:03:10 UTC > > FreeBSD doc repository > > Modified files: > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml > Log: > Simplify and clarify the bsdinstall final confirmation step. > > Revision ChangesPa

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-09 Thread Manolis Kiagias
manolis 2011-10-09 17:30:12 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: - Add a few missing semicolons in &windows; entities - Capitalize Project (as in &os; Project) Revision ChangesPath 1.6 +5 -5

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-09 Thread Warren Block
wblock 2011-10-09 17:03:10 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Simplify and clarify the bsdinstall final confirmation step. Revision ChangesPath 1.5 +7 -9 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handboo

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-09 Thread Manolis Kiagias
manolis 2011-10-09 10:57:19 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: - Add two more missing tags - Move two s one line up to prevent blank lines in the output Revision ChangesPath 1.4 +4 -6 d

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-09 Thread Manolis Kiagias
manolis 2011-10-09 08:19:25 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Add missing tag Revision ChangesPath 1.3 +1 -1 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.sgml __

Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-08 Thread Glen Barber
On 10/8/11 9:21 PM, Warren Block wrote: > wblock 2011-10-09 01:21:53 UTC > > FreeBSD doc repository > > Modified files: > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml > Log: > Various fixes: > "effective at improving performance" is correct in English. > "issues wi

cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml

2011-10-08 Thread Warren Block
wblock 2011-10-09 01:21:53 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Log: Various fixes: "effective at improving performance" is correct in English. "issues with the installation" is vague, reworded. Expand/clarify BI