Re: [Gen-art] Post-Telechat update (was Re: Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc4379bis-07)

2016-10-28 Thread Carlos Pignataro (cpignata)
Hi Elwyn, Thanks! Please see inline. Hi Jari, Deborah, All major, minor, and nits/editorials (including these extra additional points) are now addressed. On Oct 28, 2016, at 6:29 PM, Elwyn Davies > wrote: Hi Carlos, :-) Thanks for

[Gen-art] Post-Telechat update (was Re: Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc4379bis-07)

2016-10-28 Thread Elwyn Davies
Hi Carlos, :-) Thanks for addressing the comments. I have looked through -08 and there are a couple of extra points that I noticed - the s3.4 issue was effectively mentioned wrt s4.5 in my previous notes. Generally things are in good shape but there are some items that haven't been

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-weis-gdoi-iec62351-9-08

2016-10-28 Thread Brian Weis (bew)
Hi Vijay, Thanks for your review. We’ve added a “:” to the end of each term being defined. Brian > On Oct 27, 2016, at 6:11 AM, Vijay K.Gurbani > wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ