Hi Elwyn,
Thanks! Please see inline.
Hi Jari, Deborah,
All major, minor, and nits/editorials (including these extra additional points)
are now addressed.
On Oct 28, 2016, at 6:29 PM, Elwyn Davies
> wrote:
Hi Carlos,
:-)
Thanks for
Hi Carlos,
:-)
Thanks for addressing the comments. I have looked through -08 and there
are a couple of extra points that I noticed - the s3.4 issue was
effectively mentioned wrt s4.5 in my previous notes.
Generally things are in good shape but there are some items that haven't
been
Hi Vijay,
Thanks for your review. We’ve added a “:” to the end of each term being defined.
Brian
> On Oct 27, 2016, at 6:11 AM, Vijay K.Gurbani
> wrote:
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ