On Tue, 2008-12-16 at 14:57 -0300, spg76 wrote:
> I uploaded to the wiki icons for:
> * applications-development
> * system-file-manager
> * gnome-screenshot
> https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions


Great work on the trowel for applications-development. 

The sharp contrast on the metal makes it a bit hard to read and it is
not that pronounced on reference images I just googled.

Please try a wooden handle ;)


On system-file-manager, the labels are not clear. Can easily be seen as
filled rectangles in a white area instead of an empty frame. Maybe turn
this into full, white labels?

It could be of benefit to move the labels over to the left, to leave
more air for the handles.

gnome-screenshot: A dark grey or even black frame for the display would
help to make the polaroid stand out. One window on the screens should
suffice and help with the smaller sizes. For 16px, you might want to go
with just the polaroid.

Good thing you are not using just a camera icon as seen in some icon
sets, as that is bound to clash with photo-apps :)


-- 
Thorsten Wilms

thorwil's design for free software:
http://thorwil.wordpress.com/


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