Looks great! Some small proposed tweaks: Nit: "SmartTV" and "Smart TV" are used interchangeably throughout the doc. No preference on which one is used, but should be consistent.
*6.2.3.1 * Current text: "supports a new cross-device authentication protocol, called "hybrid"" Proposed text: "supports a new cross-device transport protocol, called "hybrid transports" Propose adding the following at the end of the first paragraph: "CTAP 2.2 hybrid transports is implemented by the client and authenticator platforms." Current text: "The main device and authenticator" Proposed text: "The main device (CTAP client) and authenticator" Current text: "The user will receive a push notification on the authenticator." Proposed text: "The user will typically receive a push notification on the device serving as the FIDO authenticator." *6.2.3.3* Current text: "Both the Consumption Device and the authenticator require BLE support." Proposed text: "Both the Consumption Device and the authenticator require BLE support and also need access to the internet" s/hybrid transport/hybrid transports Current text: "The mobile phone must support CTAP 2.2+ to be used as a cross-device authenticator." Proposed text: "The device serving as the FIDO authenticator must support CTAP 2.2+ to be used as a cross-device authenticator." tim On Mon, Apr 22, 2024 at 10:57 AM Rifaat Shekh-Yusef <rifaat.s.i...@gmail.com> wrote: > *This message originated outside your organization.* > > ------------------------------ > > We have not received any feedback on this document so far. > > This is a reminder to review and provide feedback on this document. > If you reviewed the document, and you do not have any comments or > concerns, it would be great if you can send an email to the list indicating > that. > > Regards, > Rifaat > > > > On Mon, Apr 15, 2024 at 9:32 AM Rifaat Shekh-Yusef < > rifaat.s.i...@gmail.com> wrote: > >> All, >> >> This is a *WG Last Call* for the *Cross-Device Flows BCP *document. >> >> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-oauth-cross-device-security-06.html >> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-oauth-cross-device-security-06.html__;!!PwKahg!525wPy1_fpxaxk0Ic3TFoDq_1bASFewwEnh5LzytxLRyQ3DK4Yk5cIXmhgeed2ocAyWYCgh_FuutXE_aMzBQRlKp$> >> >> Please, review this document and reply on the mailing list if you have >> any comments or concerns, by *April 29th*. >> >> Regards, >> Rifaat & Hannes >> >> _______________________________________________ > OAuth mailing list > OAuth@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/oauth >
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