On 5/16/24 8:05 AM, Joe Conway wrote:
On 5/15/24 21:45, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:Please provide feedback no later than Wed 2024-05-22 18:00 UTC. As the beta release takes some extra effort, I want to ensure all changes are in with time to spare before release day."You can find information about all of the features and changes found in PostgreSQL 17" Sounds repetitive; maybe:"Information about all of the features and changes in PostgreSQL 17 can be found in the [release notes]"
The first is active voice, the suggestion passive. However, I tightened the language:
You can find information about all of the PostgreSQL 17 features and changes in the [release notes](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/17/release-17.html):
"PostgreSQL 17 includes a built-in collation provider that provides similar semantics to the `C` collation provided by libc."I think that needs to mention UTF-8 encoding somehow, and "provided by libc" is not really true; maybe:"PostgreSQL 17 includes a built-in collation provider that provides similar sorting semantics to the `C` collation except with UTF-8 encoding rather than SQL_ASCII."
WFM. Taken verbatim. Thanks, Jonathan
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