[OPSAWG]Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-discardmodel-01.txt

2024-05-24 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi John, I would personally prefer if we use RFC 8791 to model the IM as an abstract data structure. The mapping with JSON will be straightforward per RFC7951. An advantage I see in using 8791 is that related data models can reuse the groupings that can be defined in the parent IM and, thus,

[OPSAWG]Re: [IANA #1363824] Expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix (ipfix)

2024-05-24 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Joe, Works for me [1]. Will queue the change for the next iteration. Thank you. Cheers, Med [1] https://github.com/boucadair/udp-ipfix/commit/5d7394f847d45619bd95527f44827fdc5537560c De : to...@strayalpha.com Envoyé : vendredi 24 mai 2024 01:43 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET Cc :

[OPSAWG]Re: [IANA #1363824] Expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix (ipfix)

2024-05-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Re-, Thanks. Please see one comment inline. Cheers, Med De : Aitken, Paul Envoyé : jeudi 23 mai 2024 18:31 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ; drafts-expert-review-comm...@iana.org; Joe Touch Cc : ie-doct...@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org Objet : Re: [IANA #1363824] Expert review for

[OPSAWG]Re: [IANA #1363824] Expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix (ipfix)

2024-05-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Re-, Please share the OLD/NEW text that you would like to see and will implement it. Thanks. Cheers, Med De : Aitken, Paul Envoyé : jeudi 23 mai 2024 17:16 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ; drafts-expert-review-comm...@iana.org; Joe Touch Cc : ie-doct...@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org Objet :

[OPSAWG]Re: [IANA #1363824] Expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix (ipfix)

2024-05-22 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Re-, > Is it possible to use unsigned256, say that topmost bits must be > zero, and reduced size encoding MAY be used? That was exactly what I initially proposed, but you seemed to question the RSE applicability (https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/VfPqkyXB07fe9VEneTXZ_2Z0-BY/)

[OPSAWG]Re: [Ie-doctors] Re: [IANA #1363823] Expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh (ipfix)

2024-05-22 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, What prevails in that text is the wording in the guidance. Made the changes to avoid confusion: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-15 Thanks. Cheers, Med De : Aitken, Paul Envoyé : mercredi 22 mai 2024 22:25 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ;

[OPSAWG]Re: Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-10

2024-05-22 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Jouni, Good catch. This is now fixed in -11. Thank you for the review. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Jouni Korhonen via Datatracker > Envoyé : mercredi 22 mai 2024 05:57 > À : ops-...@ietf.org > Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix@ietf.org; last- >

[OPSAWG]Re: [Ie-doctors] [IANA #1363822] Expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes (ipfix)

2024-05-22 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, -10 fixes all these, including the ToC level. Thank you. Cheers, Med De : Aitken, Paul Envoyé : mardi 21 mai 2024 22:58 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ; drafts-expert-review-comm...@iana.org Cc : ie-doct...@ietf.org; opsawg Objet : Re: [Ie-doctors] [IANA #1363822] Expert review

[OPSAWG]Re: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-09.txt

2024-05-21 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Doug, all, Thank you for preparing this update. Please find below minor items that you may fix before or after the WGLC. Fixing them before would be my preference, though :-) * Header OLD: Updates: RFC8907 (if approved) OLD: Updates: 8907 (if approved) * Title OLD: TACACS+ over TLS 1.3

[OPSAWG]Re: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-06.txt: 9525 Section

2024-05-21 Thread mohamed . boucadair
wg-boun...@ietf.org>> De la part de Douglas Gash (dcmgash) Envoyé : mercredi 20 mars 2024 16:40 À : opsawg@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg@ietf.org> Cc : John Heasley mailto:h...@shrubbery.net>>; Andrej Ota mailto:and...@ota.si>> Objet : Re: [OPSAWG] New Version Notification for

[OPSAWG]Re: [Last-Call] Intdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-08

2024-05-21 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Joe, Great. Thank you. Cheers, Med De : to...@strayalpha.com Envoyé : vendredi 17 mai 2024 23:14 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET Objet : Re: [Last-Call] Intdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-08 AOK - all set. Joe — Dr. Joe Touch, temporal epistemologist

[OPSAWG]Re: Security directorate review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes-09

2024-05-21 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Hilarie, (ccing OPSAWG) Thank you. The review will be ACKed in the next iteration. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Hilarie Orman > Envoyé : lundi 20 mai 2024 06:49 > À : i...@ietf.org; sec...@ietf.org > Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes@ietf.org > Objet : Security

[OPSAWG]Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-13.txt

2024-05-17 Thread mohamed . boucadair
is a work item of the Operations and Management > Area Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. > >Title: Extended TCP Options and IPv6 Extension Headers IPFIX > Information Elements >Authors: Mohamed Boucadair > Benoit Claise >Name:draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo

[OPSAWG]Re: Request to review draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13

2024-05-16 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Valery, (ccing the OPSAWG to have a public record of your excellent review). All good points. Many thanks. I trust the authors will follow up SOON. Please see some comments from my side. Cheers, Med De : Valery Smyslov Envoyé : jeudi 16 mai 2024 15:24 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET Cc

[OPSAWG]Re: shepherd review for draft-boro-opsawg-teas-common-ac

2024-05-15 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Reza, Thank you for the review. We don’t provide the full structure but snippets per the guidance in https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-11#name-tree-diagrams. We provided the following in Section 4: == The full tree diagram of the module can be generated

[OPSAWG]Re: Shepherd review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ntw-attachment-circuit

2024-05-15 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Krzysztof, Thank you for the review. Can you please check and let us know if any further change is needed:

[OPSAWG]Re: [Last-Call] Intdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-08

2024-05-15 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Joe, Thank you for the follow-up. A candidate version can be seen at: Diff: draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix.txt -

[OPSAWG]Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-ntw-attachment-circuit-10.txt

2024-05-14 Thread mohamed . boucadair
cuit-10.txt is > now available. It is a work item of the Operations and Management > Area Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. > >Title: A Network YANG Data Model for Attachment Circuits >Authors: Mohamed Boucadair > Richard Roberts > Oscar Go

[OPSAWG]Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit-12.txt

2024-05-14 Thread mohamed . boucadair
cuit-12.txt > is now available. It is a work item of the Operations and > Management Area Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. > >Title: YANG Data Models for Bearers and 'Attachment > Circuits'-as-a-Service (ACaaS) >Authors: Mohamed Boucadair > R

[OPSAWG]Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-common-ac-11.txt

2024-05-14 Thread mohamed . boucadair
A Common YANG Data Model for Attachment Circuits >Authors: Mohamed Boucadair > Richard Roberts > Oscar Gonzalez de Dios > Samier Barguil Giraldo > Bo Wu >Name:draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-common-ac-11.txt >Pages: 57 >

[OPSAWG]Re: shepherd review for draft-boro-opsawg-teas-common-ac

2024-05-14 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Reza, Thank you for preparing the writeup. Please see inline. Cheers, Med De : Rokui, Reza Envoyé : lundi 13 mai 2024 21:35 À : Joe Clarke (jclarke) ; opsawg@ietf.org; BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ; Wubo (lana) ; Richard Roberts ; Oscar González de Dios ;

[OPSAWG]Re: [Ie-doctors] [IANA #1363824] Expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix (ipfix)

2024-05-14 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, The new version with all received reviews and comments is available at: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix/ Please see inline. Cheers, Med De : Aitken, Paul Envoyé : lundi 13 mai 2024 21:53 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ;

[OPSAWG]Re: [Ie-doctors] Re: [IANA #1363823] Expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh (ipfix)

2024-05-13 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, Thanks for double checking. I don’t think there is a conflict between 3.3/3.4-3.6 because these are covering distinct aspects of the information export. Fixed the nit. Cheers, Med De : Aitken, Paul Envoyé : lundi 13 mai 2024 22:13 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ;

[OPSAWG]Re: Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-11

2024-05-13 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Tero, Thank you for the review. Please see inline. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Tero Kivinen via Datatracker > Envoyé : jeudi 9 mai 2024 17:35 > À : sec...@ietf.org > Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh@ietf.org; last- > c...@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org > Objet 

[OPSAWG]Re: [Ie-doctors] [IANA #1363824] Expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix (ipfix)

2024-05-13 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, Thanks for the review. Please see inline. You may also see the diff that integrates your comments and intdir review: Diff: draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix.txt -

[OPSAWG]Re: Intdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-08

2024-05-13 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Joe, Thank you for the excellent review. The changes to address the review can be seen here:

[OPSAWG]Re: [Ie-doctors] [IANA #1363823] Expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh (ipfix)

2024-05-13 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, Thank you for the careful review, as usual. Much appreciated! The diff to track all the changes (including other reviewers) can be seen at: Diff: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-11.txt -

[OPSAWG]Re: [Ie-doctors] [IANA #1363822] Expert review for draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes (ipfix)

2024-05-13 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, Thank you for the review. The changes can be tracked at: Diff: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes-08.txt -

[OPSAWG]Re: RtgDir Last Call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit-11

2024-05-13 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Donald, Thank you for the review. I like the suggestions. I went with almost all of them (except the one about the ToC) as you can see in the candidate version: https://boucadair.github.io/attachment-circuit-model/draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit.txt. Cheers, Med > -Message

[OPSAWG]Re: Request to review draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13

2024-05-07 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Tiru, Many thanks for the review. Forwarding it to the list, fwiw. I trust the authors will follow up. See one comment inline. Cheers, Med De : tirumal reddy Envoyé : mardi 7 mai 2024 15:17 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tl...@ietf.org Objet : Re: Request to

Re: [OPSAWG] advancing PCAP drafts

2024-05-06 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Re-, Please see inline. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Michael Richardson > Envoyé : lundi 6 mai 2024 12:18 > À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ; > opsawg@ietf.org > Objet : Re: [OPSAWG] advancing PCAP drafts > > > {please ignore unicast message I sent thirty seconds ago} >

Re: [OPSAWG] INTDIR Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes-08

2024-05-06 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Donald, Thanks for the review. All good suggestions. I went with all of the suggestions, except the refs:

Re: [OPSAWG] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-08

2024-05-06 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Watson, Thank you for the review. The review will be ACKed in the next iteration: https://github.com/boucadair/udp-ipfix/pull/5/commits/d1ea84a92a972e4ed00f408fd70362c2101b26a9 Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Watson Ladd via Datatracker > Envoyé : dimanche 5 mai 2024

Re: [OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-08

2024-05-06 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Robert, Thanks for the review. The changes made to take into account your comment can be seen at:

Re: [OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-11

2024-05-06 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Joel, Thank you for the review. You got it right. Please see more context at [1]. I updated the text to address your review. Please check the diff [1] and let me know if any further change is needed. Thanks. Cheers, Med [1]

Re: [OPSAWG] [Mud] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-ol-05.txt

2024-05-06 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Eliot, Thank you for addressing these. Please find some additional comments: 1. I created a PR for some minor points: https://github.com/elear/opsawg-ol/pull/3/files: TLP + follow the guidance for the list names. 2. I know that you don’t use the security template in 8520, but given that

Re: [OPSAWG] advancing PCAP drafts

2024-05-06 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Michael, Thank you for fixing this. FWIW, I created a PR that you can see at: https://github.com/IETF-OPSAWG-WG/draft-ietf-opsawg-pcap/pull/154/files. Please grab whatever you think useful out there. I think that it would be useful to have a new column to easily tag the status of an

Re: [OPSAWG] Intdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-11

2024-04-25 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Dirk, Thank you for the review. Please see inline. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Dirk Von Hugo via Datatracker > Envoyé : jeudi 25 avril 2024 17:05 > À : int-...@ietf.org > Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh@ietf.org; last- > c...@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org >

Re: [OPSAWG] advancing PCAP drafts

2024-04-25 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Guy, Please see inline. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Guy Harris > Envoyé : jeudi 25 avril 2024 09:53 > À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET > Cc : Michael Richardson ; opsawg@ietf.org > Objet : Re: [OPSAWG] advancing PCAP drafts > > > On Apr 25, 2024, at 12:04 AM,

Re: [OPSAWG] advancing PCAP drafts

2024-04-25 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Michael, Any update about this draft? Other than fixing a bug in Table 3.1, I thought that we were close to the WGLC. However, I checked

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-07.txt

2024-04-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Alan, Please see one comment inline. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : OPSAWG De la part de Alan DeKok > Envoyé : mardi 23 avril 2024 17:20 > À : opsawg > Objet : Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13- > 07.txt > > > Some comments on the latest draft:

Re: [OPSAWG] Confirm submission of I-D draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13

2024-04-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Re-, This can wait unless the Chairs are planning to apply for an early port/service request SOON. Cheers, Med Orange Restricted De : Douglas Gash (dcmgash) Envoyé : mardi 23 avril 2024 17:16 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ; opsawg@ietf.org Cc : Andrej Ota ; John Heasley ; Thorsten Dahm

Re: [OPSAWG] Confirm submission of I-D draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13

2024-04-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Doug, Thank you for the updates. Looks good to me. Noted the pending point about 9525, though. One minor comment about the description in Section 7, I suggest to update "Description: Login Host Protocol (TACACSS)" to mention TLS or "secure" in the description to differentiate the new entry

Re: [OPSAWG] [Mud] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-ol-05.txt

2024-04-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi all, Like Michael, I'm puzzled about the development of this draft. I raised comments back in 05/2021 that I reiterated during the call for adoption: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/OlkjFOk55hB-29UG4FQaNbunXTY/ but still see the same issues in 2024. Putting aside the

Re: [OPSAWG] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-06.txt.

2024-04-22 Thread mohamed . boucadair
psawg@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg@ietf.org> Cc : John Heasley mailto:h...@shrubbery.net>>; Andrej Ota mailto:and...@ota.si>> Objet : Re: [OPSAWG] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-06.txt Dear OPSAWG, We have uploaded a new version of the doc, primarily to

Re: [OPSAWG] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-06.txt.

2024-04-19 Thread mohamed . boucadair
rej Ota mailto:and...@ota.si>> Objet : Re: [OPSAWG] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-06.txt Dear OPSAWG, We have uploaded a new version of the doc, primarily to address as much as possible of the comprehensive review kindly submitted by Mohamed Boucadair. We than

Re: [OPSAWG] IPR POLL: Attachment circuits work

2024-04-19 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Joe, all, No, I'm not aware of any IPR that applies to these drafts. Cheers, Med De : OPSAWG De la part de Joe Clarke (jclarke) Envoyé : vendredi 19 avril 2024 16:32 À : opsawg@ietf.org Objet : [OPSAWG] IPR POLL: Attachment circuits work We're up to WG LC on these four drafts. And while

Re: [OPSAWG] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-06.txt

2024-04-17 Thread mohamed . boucadair
À : opsawg@ietf.org Cc : John Heasley ; Andrej Ota Objet : Re: [OPSAWG] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-06.txt Dear OPSAWG, We have uploaded a new version of the doc, primarily to address as much as possible of the comprehensive review kindly submitted by Mohamed

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix

2024-04-17 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Mahesh, Thank you for the review. The candidate version can be seen at: Diff: draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix.txt -

Re: [OPSAWG] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes-07

2024-04-17 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Martin, Thank you for the review. Good point about the ranges. Updated the text as you can see at: https://github.com/boucadair/simple-ipfix-fixes/pull/10/files. I double checked the registry and found that same issue should be fixed for other IEs:

Re: [OPSAWG]  WG Adoption Call for draft-pignataro-opsawg-oam-whaaat-question-mark-03

2024-04-16 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Re-, I'm afraid so. I may see a construct where one would need to insist that "virtual out-of-band" is actually relying on an underlying (physical/shared) in-band thing. But, something which is in-band; no matter whether this is virtual or physical, it is still in-band. Cheers, Med >

Re: [OPSAWG]  WG Adoption Call for draft-pignataro-opsawg-oam-whaaat-question-mark-03

2024-04-16 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Greg, all, Having this discussion is by its own sufficient to justify why we need to amend rfc6291 with terms that reflect recent needs/usages in a manner that can be easily and generally visible to the target audience. For example, Michael indicated that he wished he had a better name for

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh

2024-04-15 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Mahesh, Please see inline. Cheers, Med Orange Restricted De : Mahesh Jethanandani Envoyé : lundi 15 avril 2024 22:47 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v...@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org; pait...@ciena.com Objet : Re: AD review of

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes

2024-04-15 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Mahesh, Thank you for the follow-up. Will proceed with the submission of the new version. Please see inline. Cheers, Med De : Mahesh Jethanandani Envoyé : lundi 15 avril 2024 21:05 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fi...@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org Objet : Re: AD

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh

2024-04-15 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Mahesh, Thank you for the review. The changes can be tracked at: Diff: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh.txt -

Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes

2024-04-15 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Mahesh, Thank you for the review. The candidate version to address your review can be seen at: Diff: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes.txt -

Re: [OPSAWG]  WG Adoption Call for draft-pignataro-opsawg-oam-whaaat-question-mark-03

2024-04-11 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi all, This is really useful work. I support adoption. Some coordination with other WGs will be needed, but I'm confident Carlos/Adrian will drive that through. I have comments about some of the proposed terms: consider path coupled/path decoupled OAM instead of path path-congruent terms +

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit-10.txt

2024-04-11 Thread mohamed . boucadair
.txt > > > Internet-Draft draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit-10.txt is now > available. It is a work item of the Operations and Management Area > Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. > >Title: YANG Data Models for Bearers and 'Attachment Circuits'-as- > a-Se

Re: [OPSAWG] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-06

2024-04-04 Thread mohamed . boucadair
atest version 6 and the ideas behind the concept of > the draft makes sense, however some additional recommendations on > clarity of the draft I believe is necessary before publication. > > This draft was presented at IETF 117 last summer by Mohamed Boucadair > and adopted on November 6th 20

[OPSAWG] ac-svc-name/attachment-circuit (was RE: Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-06)

2024-04-03 Thread mohamed . boucadair
d the ideas behind the concept of the draft makes sense, however some additional recommendations on clarity of the draft I believe is necessary before publication. This draft was presented at IETF 117 last summer by Mohamed Boucadair and adopted on November 6th 2023. As the draft was adopted fairly rec

Re: [OPSAWG] Bitfields vs. Unsigned RE: Re: [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-04-02 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi all, As indicated in IETF#119, we suggest to tag this issue as closed and proceed with the publication of the current versions of the various I-Ds. Cheers, Med De : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET Envoyé : vendredi 23 février 2024 15:55 À : 'Aitken, Paul' ; 'Joe Clarke (jclarke)' ;

Re: [OPSAWG] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntw-attachment-circuit-05

2024-04-02 Thread mohamed . boucadair
sion 5 and the ideas behind the concept of > the draft makes sense, however some additional recommendations on > clarity of the draft I believe is necessary before publication. > > This draft was presented at IETF 117 last summer by Mohamed Boucadair > and adopted on November 6th 2023. As the dr

Re: [OPSAWG] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-06

2024-04-02 Thread mohamed . boucadair
ndations on > clarity of the draft I believe is necessary before publication. > > This draft was presented at IETF 117 last summer by Mohamed Boucadair > and adopted on November 6th 2023. As the draft was adopted fairly > recently, my goal is to catch any issues with the draft before

Re: [OPSAWG] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-common-ac-05

2024-03-21 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Andy, Thank you for the review. Much appreciated. Your review will be acked in next iteration of the spec: https://github.com/boucadair/attachment-circuit-model/commit/7de5b2ad817cb61813ef896885b2296d00d002bc Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Andy Smith via Datatracker >

Re: [OPSAWG] RTGDIR Early Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit

2024-03-16 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Donald, FYI, the changes are now published as -08. Thank you. Cheers, Med De : Donald Eastlake Envoyé : mardi 12 mars 2024 03:05 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET Cc : opsawg@ietf.org; draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit@ietf.org; Routing Directorate ; t...@ietf.org Objet : Re:

Re: [OPSAWG] RTGDIR Early Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit

2024-03-11 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Donald, (adding OPSAWG as it seems the review was not shared on that list) Thanks for the careful review. A diff to track the changes to address your comments can be seen at:

Re: [OPSAWG] octetArray/hextetArray/32tetArray RE: Re: [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-02-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, Do you still think there is an issue with the design? Thanks. Cheers, Med De : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET Envoyé : mardi 23 janvier 2024 14:56 À : 'Aitken, Paul' ; Joe Clarke (jclarke) ; opsawg@ietf.org Cc : ip...@ietf.org Objet : octetArray/hextetArray/32tetArray RE: Re: [IPFIX] WG

Re: [OPSAWG] Bitfields vs. Unsigned RE: Re: [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-02-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, Unless I'm mistaken, I didn't see any follow-up to this issue. May I consider this point as closed? Thanks. Cheers, Med De : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET Envoyé : mardi 23 janvier 2024 14:23 À : 'Aitken, Paul' ; Aitken, Paul ; Joe Clarke (jclarke) ; opsawg@ietf.org Cc :

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit-06.txt

2024-02-09 Thread mohamed . boucadair
and Management Area > Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. > >Title: YANG Data Models for Bearers and 'Attachment Circuits'-as- > a-Service (ACaaS) >Authors: Mohamed Boucadair > Richard Roberts > Oscar Gonzalez de Dios >

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-common-ac-05.txt

2024-02-09 Thread mohamed . boucadair
anagement Area > Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. > >Title: A Common YANG Data Model for Attachment Circuits >Authors: Mohamed Boucadair > Richard Roberts > Oscar Gonzalez de Dios > Samier Barguil Giraldo > Bo Wu

Re: [OPSAWG] Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntw-attachment-circuit-04

2024-02-09 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi all, FWIW, the proposed changes are now implemented in the published version: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-ntw-attachment-circuit-05. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET > Envoyé : jeudi 25 janvier 2024 13:46 > À : 'Martin

Re: [OPSAWG] Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-04

2024-02-09 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Martin, all, FWIW, the proposed changes are now implemented in the public version: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-06. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET > Envoyé : jeudi 25 janvier 2024 13:56 > À :

Re: [OPSAWG] [IPv6] [IPFIX] errata eid7775 RE: [**EXTERNAL**] RE: WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-02-06 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi all, Bob is right here. However, the intent of the original text is unambiguous as per the following: == Description This Information Element describes the forwarding status of the flow and any attached reasons. The reduced-size encoding rules as per [RFC7011] apply.

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-10.txt

2024-02-06 Thread mohamed . boucadair
ing Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. > >Title: Extended TCP Options and IPv6 Extension Headers IPFIX > Information Elements >Authors: Mohamed Boucadair > Benoit Claise >Name:draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-10.txt >Pages: 20 >Dates: 2024

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes-06.txt

2024-02-06 Thread mohamed . boucadair
f-opsawg-ipfix-fixes-06.txt is now available. > It is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group > (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. > >Title: Simple Fixes to the IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) > IANA Registry >Authors: Mohamed Boucadair > Ben

Re: [OPSAWG] [IPFIX] deprecating ipv6ExtensionHeaders and tcpOptions IEs RE: WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-02-05 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi all, As no objection was raised in the last two weeks, I will tag these two IEs as deprecated by the new IEs. Cheers, Med De : Benoit Claise Envoyé : lundi 5 février 2024 17:37 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ; Aitken, Paul ; Joe Clarke (jclarke) ; opsawg@ietf.org Cc : ip...@ietf.org

Re: [OPSAWG] draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh updates RFC 7012? 5610? was (Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-09.txt)

2024-02-05 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Extended TCP Options and IPv6 Extension Headers IPFIX Information Elements Authors: Mohamed Boucadair Benoit Claise Name:draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-09.txt Pages: 16 Dates: 2024-01-23 Abstract: This document specifies new IP Flow Information Expor

Re: [OPSAWG] advancing PCAP drafts

2024-02-05 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Michael, Thanks for the follow-up. Please see inline. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Michael Richardson > Envoyé : mercredi 31 janvier 2024 15:10 > À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ; > opsawg@ietf.org > Objet : Re: [OPSAWG] advancing PCAP drafts > > >

Re: [OPSAWG] draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-fixes-05 shepherd review

2024-02-04 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Thomas, all, Thanks for preparing the writeup. Looks good to me. I hope to receive more feedback on whether we mark these two IEs as deprecated. For forwardingStatus, I reiterate that the type should be unsigned32 as per the RFC. Cheers, Med De : thomas.g...@swisscom.com

Re: [OPSAWG] Submission of new version of TACACS+ TLS Spec (V4)

2024-01-25 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Authors, all, Many thanks for your effort on this document. I managed finally to read the new version. I'm afraid that some of the comments in https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-03-rev%20Med.pdf were not addressed or at least I fail

Re: [OPSAWG] Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-04

2024-01-25 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Martin, Thank you for the follow-up. Fixed the nits in the yang file. Also updated the module to make use of the new groupings for referencing purposes instead of the broken typedefs in the ac-ntw:

Re: [OPSAWG] Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntw-attachment-circuit-04

2024-01-25 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Martin, Thanks for the review. Please see inline. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Martin Björklund via Datatracker > Envoyé : mercredi 24 janvier 2024 16:20 > À : yang-doct...@ietf.org > Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-ntw-attachment-circuit@ietf.org; > opsawg@ietf.org > Objet 

Re: [OPSAWG] Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-04

2024-01-24 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Martin, Thanks for the review. FWIW, a new version that fixes the nit you reported and other minor pending we had is available online: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-05 Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Martin Björklund via

Re: [OPSAWG] [**EXTERNAL**] RE: [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-24 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, Thanks for the follow-up. Much appreciated. Please see inline. Cheers, Med De : Aitken, Paul Envoyé : mardi 23 janvier 2024 18:25 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ; Joe Clarke (jclarke) ; opsawg@ietf.org Cc : t...@ietf.org; ts...@ietf.org; 6...@ietf.org; ip...@ietf.org Objet : Re:

[OPSAWG] deprecating ipv6ExtensionHeaders and tcpOptions IEs RE: [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Re-, Paul suggested to tag these two IEs as deprecated in favor of the new full IEs. I do personally think this is OK (especially given what Andrew reported at: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/opsawg/QNm9p8V2vKuhUX5rxBCqcxD-WAY/), but would like to hear if there objections to proceed

[OPSAWG] octetArray/hextetArray/32tetArray RE: Re: [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, (restricted the distribution lists to OPSAWG and IPFIX) The octetArray type is especially confusing as these are really hextetArrays. [Med] Not sure we need a new data type here as octeArray is defined as follows: The octetArray data type has no encoding rules; it represents a raw

[OPSAWG] Bitfields vs. Unsigned RE: Re: [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, > It is consistent but wrong, as the numeric value of these fields is > meaningless. Bitfields with flags semantics don't have a meaningful > "unsigned" value. You raised this comment for both TCP/UDP specs. As I mentioned in the previous message, all existing IEs of type flags are

[OPSAWG] errata eid7775 RE: [**EXTERNAL**] RE: [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Re-, Please see inline. Cheers, Med De : Aitken, Paul Envoyé : mardi 23 janvier 2024 11:26 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ; Joe Clarke (jclarke) ; opsawg@ietf.org Cc : t...@ietf.org; ts...@ietf.org; 6...@ietf.org; ip...@ietf.org Objet : Re: [**EXTERNAL**] RE: [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

Re: [OPSAWG] [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, Thank you very much for the detailed review. There are some points that are common to the udp spec. Will discuss those in separate threads. Please see inline. Cheers, Med De : tsvwg De la part de Aitken, Paul Envoyé : vendredi 19 janvier 2024 10:52 À : Joe Clarke (jclarke) ;

Re: [OPSAWG] draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-08 shepherd review

2024-01-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Thomas, Thank you much for preparing the writeup. I'm not sure I received the comments mentioned in point 14 of the writeup, though. I suspect this is because of the issues I'm having with the IETF aliases. Please forward me offline these comments. Thanks and apologies for the

Re: [OPSAWG] [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-23 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, Thank you for the careful review and good suggestions. Went with almost all of them. Please see inline for more context. Cheers, Med De : ipv6 De la part de Aitken, Paul Envoyé : lundi 22 janvier 2024 22:50 À : Joe Clarke (jclarke) ; opsawg@ietf.org Cc : t...@ietf.org;

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-common-ac-04.txt

2024-01-22 Thread mohamed . boucadair
It is a work item of the Operations and Management Area > Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. > >Title: A Common YANG Data Model for Attachment Circuits >Authors: Mohamed Boucadair > Richard Roberts > Oscar Gonzalez de Dios > Sam

Re: [OPSAWG] [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX documents

2024-01-22 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Paul, Thanks for the review. Please see inline. Cheers, Med De : ipv6 De la part de Aitken, Paul Envoyé : vendredi 19 janvier 2024 11:58 À : Joe Clarke (jclarke) ; opsawg@ietf.org Cc : t...@ietf.org; ts...@ietf.org; 6...@ietf.org; ip...@ietf.org Objet : Re: [IPv6] [IPFIX] WG LC: IPFIX

Re: [OPSAWG] New I-D -> Guidelines for Charactering "OAM"

2024-01-17 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Carlos, Adrian, all, Thank you for editing this document. This is really useful. Alternate terms to consider for the path-congruent terms are path-coupled/path-decoupled OAM (inspired from RFC4080). When editing RFC 9451, I wish I had terms for: * "OAM packet that exclusively includes

Re: [OPSAWG] Tsvart early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-05

2024-01-17 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Re-, What about adding the following under "Operational Considerations": NEW: Implementations of tcpSharedOptionExID16 and tcpSharedOptionExID32 IEs are assumed to be provided with a list of valid Experiment IDs {{IANA-TCP-EXIDs}}. How that list is maintained is implementation-specific. Absent

Re: [OPSAWG]  WG Adoption Call for draft-opsawg-evans-discardmodel-02

2024-01-17 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi all, I support adopting this document. The authors kindly addressed many of my comments in -02. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : OPSAWG De la part de Henk Birkholz > Envoyé : mercredi 17 janvier 2024 13:52 > À : OPSAWG > Objet : [OPSAWG]  WG Adoption Call for

Re: [OPSAWG] Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit-03

2024-01-17 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Ebben, Please see inline. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Ebben Aries > Envoyé : lundi 15 janvier 2024 16:49 > À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET > Cc : yang-doct...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment- > circuit@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org > Objet : Re:

Re: [OPSAWG] [Int-dir] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-03

2024-01-17 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Joe, The very short introduction to SAFE/UNSAFE is there to help reader digest the difference between EXP and UEXP introduced right after and understand the rationale for having two IPFIX IEs. Of course, the authoritative reference for implementers is the TSVWG base spec; the exact section

Re: [OPSAWG] Tsvart early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-05

2024-01-17 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Wes, Please see inline. Cheers, Med De : Wesley Eddy Envoyé : mardi 16 janvier 2024 21:21 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ; tsv-...@ietf.org Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org Objet : Re: Tsvart early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-05 On

Re: [OPSAWG] Tsvart early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-05

2024-01-16 Thread mohamed . boucadair
Hi Wes, Please see inline. Cheers, Med De : Wesley Eddy Envoyé : mardi 16 janvier 2024 16:09 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ; tsv-...@ietf.org Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org Objet : Re: Tsvart early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-05 The

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