Remy, Some answers inline, which porobably overlap Yatch's and Qin's answers.
On Thu, Feb 2, 2017 at 2:09 PM, Remy Leone <[email protected]> wrote: > Hello, > > I got a bunch of remarks about the 6P draft > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-6tisch-6top-protocol-03 > > *4.1.1. 2-step 6top Transaction* > *4.1.2. 3-step 6top Transaction* > > Maybe it would be nice to add at the end of the workflow that if the > transaction was successful, the schedule generation is incremented to allow > inconsistencies detection. > sure, it's a simple fix. > > *4.2.4. 6P Command Identifiers* > > CMD_CLEAR: Maybe it would be a good idea to specify whether it soft, hard > or both cells that are concerned. > only the cells scheduled by the SF targetted. By defnition soft cells, but that's not the main criteria/ > > *4.2.6. 6P CellOptions* > > In Figure 11, is there is mix-up between line 2 & 3 > TX=1, *RX=0*, S=0 | select the cells scheduled with A and marked as *RX* > *TX=0*, RX=1, S=0 | select the cells scheduled with A and marked as *TX* > > and the line 6 & 7? > > *TX=1*, RX=0, S=1 | select the cells scheduled with A and marked as *RX* > and SHARED > TX=0, *RX=1*, S=1 | select the cells scheduled with A and marked as *TX* > and SHARED > > TX and RX don't seem to match. > Not an error, Node A's TX cell is node B's RX cell. > > Also, I think it would be useful to define what SHARED means, I fail to > find the definition in this draft. > It's a 802.15.4 TSCH term, > > *4.3.6. Clearing the Schedule* > > I think it would be a good idea to specify whether it's hard cells or soft > cells (or both) that are concerned by this. > see above. > > *6. Implementation Status* > > Support for 6P in Wireshark was merged upstream > https://github.com/wireshark/wireshark/commit/ > 8b0e66f22c059533643195ba7571cafe9f006f58 > Therefore there is a need to update the text concerning the Wireshark > dissector. > yep, good point. > > > Best regards > > Rémy > > _______________________________________________ > 6tisch mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6tisch > > -- _______________________________________ Thomas Watteyne, PhD Research Scientist & Innovator, Inria Sr Networking Design Eng, Linear Tech Founder & co-lead, UC Berkeley OpenWSN Co-chair, IETF 6TiSCH www.thomaswatteyne.com _______________________________________
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