#6: Section 2.2 - bad flow of text for authentication requriements
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Has the sentences " Aside from a valuable secret being exposed, a
synchronization problem can also often develop. Since there is no
single authentication mechanism that will be used everywhere there is
another associated requirement:"
I have a couple of issues here. First there is a problem which is stated
- i.e. synchronization - but the next sentence does not appear to expand
on the problem but rather deals with a different issue. I would like to
have the first thought finished before going onto the second one. I think
this paragraph is supposed to be talking about issues that we have been
taught - but the word Since does not convey this is a separate issue we
have dealing with.
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Reporter: ietf@… | Owner: draft-ietf-abfab-arch@…
Type: defect | Status: new
Priority: major | Milestone:
Component: arch | Version:
Severity: - | Keywords:
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Ticket URL: <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/abfab/trac/ticket/6>
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