Hello Daniel,

I do not have and I am not aware of any IPR on this document.

I have just submitted version -15, with the two requested fixes.


* In Section 3.3

OLD:
the KDC MAY NOT include 'sign_info' parameter

NEW:
the KDC MAY omit the 'sign_info' parameter


* The apparently unused reference "I-D.ietf-cose-rfc8152bis-struct" was actually used in Section 1.1. However, it was spread over two lines, hence probably missed by the nit checker. It's fixed now.


Best,
/Marco

On 2021-12-23 01:55, Daniel Migault wrote:
Hi,

In order to complete the shepherd I would like the co-author to confirm that any and all appropriate IPR disclosures required for full conformance with the provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79 have already been filed.

Please have also a look at the nits
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There is a MAY NOT that causes an issue as well as unused references.

Yours,
Daniel

On Mon, Oct 25, 2021 at 12:48 PM Marco Tiloca <marco.tiloca=40ri...@dmarc.ietf.org <mailto:40ri...@dmarc.ietf.org>> wrote:

    Hello ACE,

    This new version should have addressed all the WGLC comments from
    Göran
    [1] and Cigdem [2], as well as further points from follow-up
    discussions
    on the thread throughout the draft revision.

    Thank you very much for the good comments!

    Best,
    /Marco

    [1]
    https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ace/pr2gBhvqy9j8AfUdQVTZLwamXac/
    
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    > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line
    Internet-Drafts directories.
    > This draft is a work item of the Authentication and
    Authorization for Constrained Environments WG of the IETF.
    >
    >          Title           : Key Provisioning for Group
    Communication using ACE
    >          Authors         : Francesca Palombini
    >                            Marco Tiloca
    >       Filename        : draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-14.txt
    >       Pages           : 106
    >       Date            : 2021-10-25
    >
    > Abstract:
    >     This document defines how to use the Authentication and
    Authorization
    >     for Constrained Environments (ACE) framework to distribute
    keying
    >     material and configuration parameters for secure group
    communication.
    >     Candidate group members acting as Clients and authorized to
    join a
    >     group can do so by interacting with a Key Distribution
    Center (KDC)
    >     acting as Resource Server, from which they obtain the keying
    material
    >     to communicate with other group members.  While defining general
    >     message formats as well as the interface and operations
    available at
    >     the KDC, this document supports different approaches and
    protocols
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    delegated to
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    >     instances that target a particular group communication
    approach and
    >     define how communications in the group are protected. 
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