Paul, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.
Lars > On Jan 20, 2023, at 19:32, Paul Kyzivat <pkyzi...@alum.mit.edu> wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize-05 > Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat > Review Date: 2023-01-20 > IETF LC End Date: 2023-01-24 > IESG Telechat date: ? > > Summary: > > This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the review. > > Issues: 1 > > 1) ISSUE: Form and completeness of the document > > This document reads as a good concept document proposing how RFC 9202 could > be revised to allow use of both TLS and DTLS. But it fails to do the work of > actually making those revisions. It leaves that work to the reader. It is > hard to believe that all readers will infer the identical set of changes. > > I suggest that this document's status be changed to an informational, and > then work begin on an rfc9202bis document that incorporates the proposed > changes. > > -- > last-call mailing list > last-c...@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
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