Document: draft-friel-acme-subdomains-02 Reviewer: Russ Housley Date: 2020-08-04
Major Concern: The TODO markers regarding wildcard domain names, the 200 response code, and the security considerations should be filled in with strawman text before this I-D is adopted by the ACME WG. Minor Concerns: General: s/certificate authority/certification authority/ (many) Abstract: s/certificate authority policy/certificate policy/ Introduction: s/X.509 (PKIX)/X.509v3 (PKIX) [RFC5280]/ Terminology: Correct CA, please. See above. Terminology: Please add a definition of subdomain. Nits: Section 3: says: 3. client sends POST-as-GET requests to retrieve the "authorizations", with the downloaded "authorization" object(s) containing the "identifier" that the client must prove control of s/client must prove control of/client must prove that they control/ There is something wrong with the table formatting in Section 6.2. _______________________________________________ Acme mailing list Acme@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/acme