It's interesting to plumb the ostensible differences between the a.e.'s I 
claim we get from sporting events and "real life" dramas. 

I watched the baseball game the other night in which the Red Sox pitcher Jon 
Lester threw a no-hitter. Lester is the guy in his mid-twenties who two years 
ago, when he had a great season going, had to leave baseball because he was 
found to have cancer. He beat it, and came back to the majors. 

There was TENSION the other night, which brought EXCITEMENT, the way a good 
movie thriller might. (Note: excitement without tension is trivial. Scaring 
someone with an unprepared-for "Boo!" is trivial.) The game certainly bubbled 
up 
the word 'drama' in my mind, but   -- with Chris -- I recognized it as, call 
it, a second-class drama -- not in a class with the great dramas of theater. 

Why?   Several thoughts came to mind.   One, in a great drama, everything 
contributes to a central "story" -- a story that is COMPLETE. 

Two, it felt too brief -- which might seem odd since, from the time we fans 
suspected a no-hitter might be in progress, it took a good hour until the final 
out in the ninth inning confirmed the event. Still, it felt like an EPISODE 
in a possible drama, not a complete drama. In other words, tension and 
excitement may be necessary in a drama, but they are not sufficient. 

Three, the element of drama it lacked was life-arc FINALITY. "He did it!" But 
it doesn't change his a life a bit. He'll pitch again later this week, and 
he'll have to continue to show great ability or he could be back in the minors 
by season's end. If he stays in the majors, gets a raise and an extended 
contract, it will be because of a whole successful season in 2008, not because 
of 
this one glittering game. The no-hitter was marvelous, but solely an episode, 
not a final act.   

It forces me to rethink my claim that Joe Montana, the essence of Nemesis to 
the Bengals, gave us "drama" in the last three minutes of that Superbowl. Same 
with Kirk Gibson limping to the plate to hit the world series game-winning 
home run. I accepted tension and excitement for "drama". But they too were just 
episodes -- albeit episodes at a level of tension and excitement seldom 
reached in sporting events. Drama must have moments of tension and excitement, 
and 
when I sensed these elements in the Lester, Montana, and Gibson episodes (and 
the "slow pursuit" of O.J. Simpson in the white bronco), it was very like 
heightened moments in great drama, and I yelped, "Drama!" Mistake.   I still 
claim 
there is a species of a.e. entailed in usch events, but I should have saved 
the word 'drama' for something "bigger".

Yet another element necessary for great drama is this: We must see the 
principals confronting DECISIONS, CHOICES, where we can imagine alternatives he 
is 
choosing among. And we must observe how their choices determine the outcome. We 
can't observe this conscious act of choosing by Jon Lester. We saw him throw 
excellent pitches, but every pitcher chooses to do that.   In a foot-race, we 
may never see a hundred yard dash that is truly dramatic. One guy runs faster 
than the next -- but for us the audience to appreciate it as drama we'd have 
to be aware of some conscious deliberation in the runner, and we almost never 
can in   that ten-second event. This is a reason why sports movies can provide 
tension and excitement, but seldom drama. 

Same with movies about other performers -- singers, pianists, composers, 
dancers. It can be interesting and even exciting to watch an actor playing 
Mozart 
as he composes his own "Requiem", but the moment does not quite provide drama. 
The central events in drama must be acts of observable choice where we grasp 
alterntive possibilities, why the character chooses the way he does. In the 
movie "Breaking Away", though the key event is merely a bicycle race, we do see 
our hero DECIDE: After he is thrown to the ground and his bike smashed near 
the end, he can either quit, or show grit, get up, find another bike, and keep 
going.   So that movie provides tension, excitement, and decision, and even an 
element of finality -- his victory rounds off his quest in the movie. In 
"Chariots of Fire", we see a similar moment early in the film: Eric Liddell, 
running a one-lap race, is tripped and he tumbles to the ground. But we see his 
determination as he makes himself get up and chase the now-far-ahead other 
runners. He catches them; he wins. Finality to that moment. (In the final races 
of 
"Chariots", we certainly get tension and excitement and finality -- but no 
naked 
deliberation: Liddell and Abrahams simply run faster than the other guys. 

Nevertheless, even the combination of TENSION, EXCITEMENT, OBSERVABLE 
DECISION, and FINALITY are not sufficient to warrant the honorific label "great 
drama". Why not?   

Because it has to be LIFE-ARC finality, and that's a good part of why 
"Breaking Away" and "Chariots", gratifying though they are, are far from 
"Oedipus", 
"Death of a Salesman", and "A Streetcar Named Desire". 

In addition to TENSION, EXCITEMENT, OBSERVABLE DECISION, AND LIFE-ARC 
FINALITY, there is arguably a fifth element needed in great drama, and that's 
what 
I'll call GRAVITY. If a life is at stake, is that enough to satisfy this fifth 
necessary element for great drama? Or does it have to be the life of a "GREAT 
man/woman", as Aristotle suggests? It does not seem so to me. Neither Willy 
Loman nor Blanche DeBois seems "great", but still "Death" and "Streetcar" feel 
to 
me like great tragic dramas. 

As a playwright, I myself am an elitist in that I seem to want to write only 
stories that have a very gifted character at the center. But I take that to be 
neither a virtue nor a flaw in me -- simply a characteristic. It certainly 
doesn't imply that my plays are thus assuredly "important", nor, say I, should 
they be condemned solely because they neglect the "common" person.   

A "nice" question is, can the death of a child ever be the stuff of tragic 
drama?   After all, for all we know the kid might have grown up to be a serial 
killer. In other words, young children are too "indeterminate" -- even when 
they are "the last of the royal line".   My answer is yes: the death of a child 
can be the stuff of tragedy, but the "tragic figure" cannot be the child -- it 
would be the parent. 

I haven't addressed here the question of "style". 

 


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