I would say "specifically targeted" not "specially targeted". Profesional be Professional in multiple places. Also on the For Home and For Business pages, "The Speeds that you are wishing are here" should be "the speeds that you are wanting " or "the speeds that you are wishing for".
That's all I found. On Mon, Jan 11, 2016 at 7:39 AM, Jaime Solorza <losguyswirel...@gmail.com> wrote: > And Gino is doing this... > On Jan 11, 2016 2:00 AM, "Josh Reynolds" <j...@kyneticwifi.com> wrote: > >> Yes, and have since the 90s. >> On Jan 10, 2016 8:31 PM, "Josh Luthman" <j...@imaginenetworksllc.com> >> wrote: >> >>> Do you say FAQ as a word like NASA? Sounds vulgar. >>> >>> Josh Luthman >>> Office: 937-552-2340 >>> Direct: 937-552-2343 >>> 1100 Wayne St >>> Suite 1337 >>> Troy, OH 45373 >>> On Jan 10, 2016 9:16 PM, "Simon Westlake" <simon@sonar.software> wrote: >>> >>>> Crazy. It's a whole new world down there. >>>> >>>> On 1/10/2016 8:13 PM, Josh Luthman wrote: >>>> >>>> F A Q. >>>> >>>> NASA. >>>> >>>> ? >>>> >>>> Josh Luthman >>>> Office: 937-552-2340 >>>> Direct: 937-552-2343 >>>> 1100 Wayne St >>>> Suite 1337 >>>> Troy, OH 45373 >>>> On Jan 10, 2016 9:11 PM, "Simon Westlake" <simon@sonar.software> >>>> <simon@sonar.software> wrote: >>>> >>>>> The dictionary definition of an initialism is an abbreviation you'd >>>>> pronounce the individual letters off, which wouldn't be the case for me >>>>> pronouncing either 'FAQ' or 'NASA', but I am not sure how they pronounce >>>>> these things in Ohio ;) >>>>> >>>>> On 1/10/2016 8:07 PM, Josh Luthman wrote: >>>>> >>>>> FAQ is an initialism. NASA is an acronym. >>>>> >>>>> Josh Luthman >>>>> Office: 937-552-2340 >>>>> Direct: 937-552-2343 >>>>> 1100 Wayne St >>>>> Suite 1337 >>>>> Troy, OH 45373 >>>>> On Jan 10, 2016 9:05 PM, "Simon Westlake" <simon@sonar.software> >>>>> <simon@sonar.software> wrote: >>>>> >>>>>> No, background doesn't show up for me. The few things I noticed >>>>>> clicking around: >>>>>> >>>>>> The quantity of symbols on the front page seems excessive. Things >>>>>> like 'Awesome' and 'Simple' are overkill IMO, it detracts from the rest >>>>>> of >>>>>> the messaging because they're pretty vague. >>>>>> Some grammatical errors too like 'We are Provide Top Notch Support.' >>>>>> Same with the 'We are local' one. Some spelling mistakes in the 'What is >>>>>> Gigabit1' section on front page too (e.g. effectivly should be >>>>>> effectively, >>>>>> 'bulding' on 'For Home' section should be 'Building') >>>>>> Faq should be FAQ (it's an acronym) >>>>>> Video on front page obviously needs replacing :) >>>>>> >>>>>> Otherwise, looks good to me. >>>>>> >>>>>> On 1/10/2016 7:54 PM, Jaime Solorza wrote: >>>>>> >>>>>> Loads up but background does not show....also check specially versus >>>>>> especially with word smiths on list. >>>>>> On Jan 10, 2016 6:40 PM, "Gino Villarini" <ginovi...@gmail.com> >>>>>> wrote: >>>>>> >>>>>>> hi guys! spent most of the weekend doing a website for our new mdu >>>>>>> project >>>>>>> >>>>>>> please check it out! feedback appreciated! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> its currently being hosted on a test site: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> http://gigabit1.x10host.com/ >>>>>>> >>>>>>> please let me know if a background image is being loaded in the faq >>>>>>> page... its not loading for me! >>>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> -- >>>>>> Simon Westlake >>>>>> Skype: Simon_Sonar >>>>>> Email: simon@sonar.software >>>>>> Phone: (702) 447-1247 >>>>>> --------------------------- >>>>>> Sonar Software Inc >>>>>> The next generation of ISP billing and OSShttps://sonar.software >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>> -- >>>>> Simon Westlake >>>>> Skype: Simon_Sonar >>>>> Email: simon@sonar.software >>>>> Phone: (702) 447-1247 >>>>> --------------------------- >>>>> Sonar Software Inc >>>>> The next generation of ISP billing and OSShttps://sonar.software >>>>> >>>>> >>>> -- >>>> Simon Westlake >>>> Skype: Simon_Sonar >>>> Email: simon@sonar.software >>>> Phone: (702) 447-1247 >>>> --------------------------- >>>> Sonar Software Inc >>>> The next generation of ISP billing and OSShttps://sonar.software >>>> >>>>
