I retract "minor fixes" and submit this, again w/ shinies
Title: Minor fixes (sans typos)
AI: 3
In rule 2474, entitled "Green cards",
replace the text
{{When a person is issued a Green Card, they are ENCOURAGED to travel to the
United States.
}}
with
{{When a person is issued a Green Card, e is ENCOURAGED to travel to the
United States.}}
In rule 1728, entitled "Dependent Actions"
replace the text
{{If the action is to be performed With N Objections, With N Agoran Consent, or
With Notice, if the intent was announced at least 4 days earlier.
}}
with
{{If the action is to be performed Without N Objections, With N Agoran Consent,
or With Notice, if the intent was announced at least 4 days earlier.
}}
In rule 2446 entitled "The Agoran Newspaper"
Append to the second last paragraph, the sentence
{{The Reportor's reports are still subject to the requirements of rule 2143}}
replace the text
{{The Reportor should keep in mind that the goal of eir weekly report
is to create
more informed population.}}
With
{{The Reportor SHALL include at least one piece of information relevant to Agora
in the last week and SHALL write with the goal of creating a more
informed population.}}
In the rule currently not assigned a number called "Rewards", replace the text
{{ * Publishing a duty-fulfilling report: 5 shinies.}}
with
{{ *Publishing a duty-fulfilling report: 5 shinies. This reward can be claimed a
maximum of once per office per week for a weekly report, and once per office
per month for a monthly report.}}
I retract "Cards are appealable, kinda" and resubmit, w/ Shinies
Title: Cards are appealable 2.0
AI: 2
In Rule 2426 entitled "Cards"
replace the text
{{A person SHALL NOT issue a Card unless:}}
with
{{A person CANNOT, and SHALL NOT attempt to, issue a Card unless}}
and replace the text
{{Any attempt to issue a Card, or any intent for a dependent action to issue a
Card, is INEFFECTIVE if it does not include the following information:}}
with
{{A player CANNOT, and SHALL NOT attempt to, issue a card or intend for a
dependent action to issue a card unless the issuance or intent includes the
following information}}
On Fri, Aug 4, 2017 at 9:42 AM, Aris Merchant
<thoughtsoflifeandligh...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Oops. You already did. Sorry!
>
> -Aris
>
> On Thu, Aug 3, 2017 at 4:35 PM, Aris Merchant
> <thoughtsoflifeandligh...@gmail.com> wrote:
>> Going to fix that? Also, if you care to resubmit, would you include
>> nichdel's proposed modification to the rewards rule in the general
>> fixes proposal?
>>
>> -Aris
>>
>> On Wed, Aug 2, 2017 at 11:49 PM, V.J Rada <vijar...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>> And I didn't fix my typo of dependent, twice. Goddamn.
>>>
>>> On Thu, Aug 3, 2017 at 4:47 PM, V.J Rada <vijar...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>> I pend the following two proposals: the 1st with AP &
>>>> the 2nd with Shinies.
>>>>
>>>> Title: Cards are appealable, kinda
>>>> AI: 2
>>>> In Rule 2426 entitled "Cards"
>>>> replace the text
>>>> {{A person SHALL NOT issue a Card unless:}}
>>>> with
>>>> {{A person CANNOT, and SHALL NOT attempt to, issue a Card unless}}
>>>> and replace the text
>>>> {{Any attempt to issue a Card, or any intent for a dependent action to
>>>> issue a
>>>> Card, is INEFFECTIVE if it does not include the following information:}}
>>>> with
>>>> {{A player CANNOT, and SHALL NOT attempt to, issue a card or intend for a
>>>> dependant action to issue a card unless the issuance or intent includes the
>>>> following information}}
>>>>
>>>> Title: Minor fixes
>>>> Author: V.J Rada
>>>> AI: 3
>>>> In rule 2474, entitled "Green cards",
>>>> replace the text
>>>> {{When a person is issued a Green Card, they are ENCOURAGED to travel to
>>>> the
>>>> United States.
>>>> }}
>>>> with
>>>> {{When a person is issued a Green Card, e is ENCOURAGED to travel to the
>>>> United States.}}
>>>>
>>>> In rule 1728, entitled "Dependant Actions"
>>>> replace the text
>>>> {{If the action is to be performed With N Objections, With N Agoran
>>>> Consent, or
>>>> With Notice, if the intent was announced at least 4 days earlier.
>>>> }}
>>>> with
>>>> {{If the action is to be performed Without N Objections, With N Agoran
>>>> Consent,
>>>> or With Notice, if the intent was announced at least 4 days earlier.
>>>> }}
>>>>
>>>> In rule 2446 entitled "The Agoran Newspaper"
>>>> Append to the second last paragraph, the sentence
>>>> {{The Reportor's reports are still subject to the requirements of rule
>>>> 2143}}
>>>> replace the text
>>>> {{The Reportor should keep in mind that the goal of eir weekly report
>>>> is to create
>>>> more informed population.}}
>>>> With
>>>> {{The Reportor SHALL include at least one piece of information relevant to
>>>> Agora
>>>> in the last week and SHALL write with the goal of creating a more
>>>> informed population.}}
>>>>
>>>> In the rule currently not assigned a number called "Rewards", replace the
>>>> text
>>>> {{ * Publishing a duty-fulfilling report: 5 shinies.}}
>>>> with
>>>> {{ *Publishing a duty-fulfilling report: 5 shinies. This reward can be
>>>> claimed a
>>>> maximum of once per office per week for a weekly report, and once per
>>>> office
>>>> per month for a monthly report.}}
>>>>
>>>> On Thu, Aug 3, 2017 at 3:33 PM, Owen Jacobson <o...@grimoire.ca> wrote:
>>>>> I would appreciate if you separated the change to Cards into a separate
>>>>> proposal. It is not minor, though it is a fix.
>>>>>
>>>>> Beyond that, this is grand. Thank you for undertaking this. I suspect
>>>>> that fix to 1728, in particular, is urgent.
>>>>>
>>>>> -o
>>>>>
>>>>>> On Jul 31, 2017, at 12:37 AM, V.J Rada <vijar...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Title: Minor fixes
>>>>>> Author: V.J Rada
>>>>>> AI: 3
>>>>>> In rule 2474, entitled "Green cards",
>>>>>> replace the text
>>>>>> {{When a person is issued a Green Card, they are ENCOURAGED to travel to
>>>>>> the
>>>>>> United States.
>>>>>> }}
>>>>>> with
>>>>>> {{When a person is issued a Green Card, e is ENCOURAGED to travel to the
>>>>>> United States.}}
>>>>>>
>>>>>> In rule 1728, entitled "Dependant Actions"
>>>>>> replace the text
>>>>>> {{If the action is to be performed With N Objections, With N Agoran
>>>>>> Consent, or
>>>>>> With Notice, if the intent was announced at least 4 days earlier.
>>>>>> }}
>>>>>> with
>>>>>> {{If the action is to be performed Without N Objections, With N Agoran
>>>>>> Consent,
>>>>>> or With Notice, if the intent was announced at least 4 days earlier.
>>>>>> }}
>>>>>>
>>>>>> In rule 2446 entitled "The Agoran Newspaper"
>>>>>> Append to the second last paragraph, the sentence
>>>>>> {{The Reportor's reports are still subject to the requirements of rule
>>>>>> 2143}}
>>>>>> replace the text
>>>>>> {{The Reportor should keep in mind that the goal of eir weekly report
>>>>>> is to create
>>>>>> more informed population.}}
>>>>>> With
>>>>>> {{The Reportor SHALL include at least one piece of information relevant
>>>>>> to Agora
>>>>>> in the last week and SHALL write with the goal of creating a more
>>>>>> informed population.}}
>>>>>>
>>>>>> In Rule 2426 entitled "Cards"
>>>>>> replace the text
>>>>>> {{A person SHALL NOT issue a Card unless:}}
>>>>>> with
>>>>>> {{A person CANNOT, and SHALL NOT attempt to, issue a Card unless}}
>>>>>> and replace the text
>>>>>> {{Any attempt to issue a Card, or any intent for a dependent action to
>>>>>> issue a
>>>>>> Card, is INEFFECTIVE if it does not include the following information:}}
>>>>>> with
>>>>>> {{A player CANNOT, and SHALL NOT attempt to, issue a card or intend for a
>>>>>> dependant action to issue a card unless the issuance or intent includes
>>>>>> the
>>>>>> following information}}
>>>>>>
>>>>>> --
>>>>>>> From V.J Rada
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> --
>>>> From V.J Rada
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> --
>>> From V.J Rada
--
>From V.J Rada
