On 6/5/23 11:52, ais523 via agora-business wrote:
>> 8991~   Janet                   2.0   Reach clarification
> AGAINST: I find the first sentence here hard to parse, so it doesn't
> clarify the rule very well. (The content after ", and" should probably
> be in a different sentence: it's almost possible to parse it as being a
> condition for having an active reach, rather than a consequence of
> having an active reach. The unintended reading uses commas
> inconsistently, which is probably enough to disambiguate, but I'd
> prefer to avoid text that's that hard to understand on a first
> reading.)
>

I change my vote on the above-referenced decision to ENDORSE ais523.

-- 
Janet Cobb

Assessor, Rulekeepor, S​tonemason

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