On Thu, 5 Jan 2017, Owen Jacobson wrote:
> {{{
> Modify the rule “Economics” by removing the paragraph
> 
>     The Secretary CAN cause Agora to pay any player or organization by
>     announcement if doing so is specified by a rule.
> 
> Modify the rule “Payday” by replacing the first paragraph with
> 
>     At the start of each month, if Agora's Balance is not 0 or less,
>     the Secretary CAN and SHALL, within 7 days, cause Agora to pay
>     each player 10 shinies, plus another 10 shinies for each office
>     that player holds.
> 
> [“CAN and SHALL” appears to be the traditional wording for enabling and
> imposing a responsibility on an office. See rule 107, rule 955, rule 103
> for examples.]
> }}}

You also need to add a CAN to this part:
       If Agora's Balance becomes 0 or less before every player is paid,
       the Secretary SHALL continue to cause Agora to pay until every
       player has been paid.

But in general, why not make it automatic to transfer the right amount 
with the announcement, therefore the amount transferred is always "right" 
and if you make a mistake, it's just about correcting the Report (and
people can spend in the meantime):

Modify the rule “Payday” to read:

      In a timely fashion after the start of each month, if Agora's Balance
      is greater than 0, the Secretary CAN and SHALL initiate a Payday by
      announcement.  The initiation of a Payday causes Agora to pay each
      player 10 shinies, plus another 10 shinies for each office that player
      holds.

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