On Tue, 2022-02-15 at 20:13 +0000, Nix Null via agora-official wrote: > So right now, I'm asking for at least 3 people to please take the > time to read Trigon's hard work and respond to it as described above.
There's a typo in the section "Ownership vs. Possession" (specifically, an unfinished sentence "This was"). Similarly, "The Second Vote Emoji Switch" ends with the unfinished sentence "Although". The thesis that was submitted basically has two parts. One is a history of a particular round of Infinite Nomic, which contains a huge amount of detail. The other is a set of conclusions, which are more perfunctory. This combination strikes me as being very awkward for a thesis, because it makes it harder to see how the conclusions are supported. (I'm reminded of Wikipedia's "{{no footnotes}}" cleanup tag, "this article includes a list of references … but its sources remain unclear because it lacks inline citations.") I think the thesis that this work "wants" to be is as some pieces of game design advice for nomics, illustrated using incidents that arose when the advice wasn't followed. (For example, "it's common for there to be scams based on players deregistering and immediately reregistering, so you need to either pay attention to these or to limit how often players can do it", or "it's helpful to ensure that any hypothetical scam that could be used to break the game can also be used to win the game, encouraging scammers to pick the less destructive option".) Given that all the examples are drawn from a specific round of Infinite Nomic, it's thus a lot less comprehensive than it could be. (It might be interesting to carry out the same exercise on, say, BlogNomic's glossary – almost every rule there is intended to cover some past loophole or prevent the repeat of some past incident, and an explanation of why they're all there would be very instructive.) There's probably also scope for a full thesis discussing how textually a nomic should be interpreting its rules, especially if they're written in a fairly informal style; nomics often start out writing rules in the hope they'll be interpreted the way that the author means them, but then subsequently being interpreted with a non-obvious or perverse reading of the text because that's required for a scam. I've seen a lot of bad blood created at nomic due to players being upset that some scams have been ruled to work and others have been ruled not to be, and it's hard to be fair in this respect when using anything other than very objective rules, but a very formal process of rules interpretation has its own issues. This is only a minor part of the thesis as submitted, though (it brings up the question, but doesn't really produce an answer to it). In short, I think what's currently written is a long historical document that's been kind-of shoehorned into being a thesis, and although it serves its purpose as a history well, there's still a lot of scope to make it more fitting for the purpose of being a thesis. Despite there being lots of room for improvement, it might nonetheless be good enough as it is, though. I'd be onboard with either giving this a lesser degree, or reworking it to be more analysis heavy and less fact-heavy in order to make it worthy of a higher degree. -- ais523