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------- Additional comments from [EMAIL PROTECTED] Thu May 15 01:54:33 +0000 
2008 -------
Looks good, though now that I see the text again I would remove the final
Openoffice.org in that sentence as redundant.

A recommended version would be:
Help us prove that Openoffice.org has already gained significant marketshare by
registering!

Also the "is" in the next sentence is redundant. The more natural way to say it 
is:
Registration is voluntary and without obligation.

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