In general, this draft is in good shape.

One randomly caught problem, in Section 5.1.2.2, the ordinal mode introduction, 
it says this cost mode is a ranking from a particular source to a set of 
destinations. But in Section 5.2, the introduction of cost map structure, the 
cost mode "ordinal" can be applied to m*n entries in the cost map. So I suggest 
to modify the previous section 5.1.2.2 to make them consistent.

BR,
-Haibin

> -----Original Message-----
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> Marocco
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> Subject: [alto] WGLC: draft-ietf-alto-protocol-11
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> The chairs would like to declare a Working Group Last Call for
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> Please do review the latest version of the draft, and send any comments to the
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> Ciao,
> Enrico

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