Dear Mirja, Vijay, Jan and ALTO WG The version below addresses Mirja's feedback with updates as listed below. Many thanks Mirja for your review. Sabine
----------------------------------------------------------------- draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-15.txt updates ----------------------------------------------------------------- ----- Section 1: para 2: 1) reinserted previous text "Providing network costs for only the current time thus may not be sufficient, in particular for applications that can schedule their traffic in a span of time, for example by deferring backups or other background traffic to off-peak hours." 2) Move added text referring to [draft-xiang-alto-multidomain-analytics] to a new section 2.1 "Some recent known uses" That is a subsection of Section 2: "Overview of ALTO Cost Calendars and terminology" - para 5: replaced "draft" by "document" ----- Section 2.2 of v14 "ALTO Cost Calendar overview" (non-normative): para 2 1) Moved new text referring to the [SENSE-sdn-e2e-net] to the new section 2.1 "Some recent known uses" 2) Put normative keywords "RECOMMENDED" and "SHOULD" in lower case. ----- Section 4.1.2 (normative) - Last paragraph Added above-mentioned sentence with normative keywords in upper case. ----- Sections 4.1.2, 4.2.3, 4.2.4: JSON examples - expanded abbreviations to full value arrays, - checked the Content-Length fields - addressed the "too long line" issues -----Original Message----- From: alto <alto-boun...@ietf.org> On Behalf Of internet-dra...@ietf.org Sent: Tuesday, January 21, 2020 8:25 PM To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org Cc: alto@ietf.org Subject: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-15.txt A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization WG of the IETF. Title : ALTO Cost Calendar Authors : Sabine Randriamasy Richard Yang Qin Wu Lingli Deng Nico Schwan Filename : draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-15.txt Pages : 31 Date : 2020-01-21 Abstract: This document is an extension to the base Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO) protocol. It extends the ALTO cost information service so that applications decide not only 'where' to connect, but also 'when'. This is useful for applications that need to perform bulk data transfer and would like to schedule these transfers during an off-peak hour, for example. This extension introduces ALTO Cost Calendar, with which an ALTO Server exposes ALTO cost values in JSON arrays where each value corresponds to a given time interval. The time intervals as well as other Calendar attributes, are specified in the Information Resources Directory and ALTO Server responses. The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar/ There are also htmlized versions available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-15 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-15 A diff from the previous version is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-15 Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ _______________________________________________ alto mailing list alto@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto _______________________________________________ alto mailing list alto@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto