Dear ALTO WG,
Below is my review for the performance metrics draft.
The document is well written and easy to follow. The specifications are also
well-organized. I do not see major problems with the technical contents.
However, there are a few typos and inconsistent usage of terms, as listed below.
Best,
Kai
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Page 5: para 1:
rough -> roughly, max -> maximum
Page 6, sec 2.1
remove "and" before sla
latency typically do -> does
"SHOULD NOT" -> "MUST NOT", "can be placed" -> "must be placed"
Page 7, para 1:
a "sla" -> an "sla"
after figure 1, para 1:
"estimation -> "estimation"
Page 8,
with letter p -> with letter "p"
Page 15, example:
delay-var -> delay-variation
Page 28:
ALTO Server and Client -> ALTO server and client
Page 29:
"Since he ..." -> The paragraph is repeated and should be removed
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