Authors: I have reviewed version -17 against my chair reviews of the draft.
I will be submitting version -17 to IESG shortly. In the meantime, here are residual comments from version -17 and discussion from the chair review that you can incorporate during AUTH48. - S3.2.1: s/registered at the IANA,/registered with IANA,/ - Discussion around Section 4.7.1, the resolution was: > [ [SR] ] (Sabine) ***** > Actually we removed 4.7.1 and the text of 4.7 (not the title yet). > Most of the text of 4.7 was moved to 4.6.1 last paragraph, as 4.7 > "looked" too small. However, even if the text of 4.7 is short, it > is important, as it introduces fields that must be specified at > the IANA, as specified in section 12.3. So we may just put the text > back in 4.7, if you think it is better. I think current S4.7 is fine, the length of a section should not dictate whether or not a content is in a section, the content should. - Discussion around Section 4.3.3, the resolution was: > [ [SR] ] (sabine) ***** > the text has been updated and uses "subsets" (upper level) and > "superset" (lower level). [...] Therefore, we would rather use: > supersets (upper levels), subsets (lower levels) [...] That is fine as long as you define your intention before hand, which you are doing now. - S5.1.1: s/with the IANA/with IANA/ - S11: s/at the IANA/from IANA/ Thank you all for your hard work. - vijay
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