This looks basically fine. I would use only one "very" The Latest Activity and Next Steps are repetitious.
thanks david jencks On Aug 10, 2010, at 6:33 AM, Simone Tripodi wrote: > Hi all guys, > I propose the following report (has to be submitted tomorrow): > > ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ > > Amber is a project to develop a Java library which provides an API > specification for, and an unconditionally compliant implementation of > the OAuth v1.0, v1.0a and v2.0 specifications. OAuth is a mechanism > that allows users to authenticate and authorise access by another > party to resources they control while avoiding the need to share their > username and password credentials. > > The most important issues that must be addressed before graduation are: > > * attract new users and developers > * making a release > > The Incubator PMC / ASF Board should be aware that: > > * Involved people have been very very busy due to personal/business > issues in the last month. > > Latest activity: > > * apply the API definition choices approved by the community. > > Next steps: > > * apply the API definition choices approved by the community > * implementation of different specification versions (client and server) > > Community: > > * The community is in the first stages of formation and solely > consists of the developers, though a few users start to appear on the > mailing lists. > > Signed off by mentor: > > > WDYT? > Simo > > http://people.apache.org/~simonetripodi/ > http://www.99soft.org/ > > > > On Wed, Aug 4, 2010 at 9:04 PM, Simone Tripodi <[email protected]> > wrote: >> Hello Pid!!! >> I think we should report that, due to personal business stuff, the >> Amber community has been quite silent but coming back just after >> August's vacations. >> WDYT? >> Thanks a lot! >> Simo >> >> http://people.apache.org/~simonetripodi/ >> http://www.99soft.org/ >> >> >> >> On Wed, Aug 4, 2010 at 4:45 PM, Pid <[email protected]> wrote: >>> Nothing much has happened recently, I guess due to leave etc. >>> >>> Anyone have any other comments? >>> >>> >>> >>> p >>> >>> >>> On 01/08/2010 15:00, [email protected] wrote: >>>> Dear Amber Developers, >>>> >>>> This email was sent by an automated system on behalf of the Apache >>>> Incubator PMC. >>>> It is an initial reminder to give you plenty of time to prepare your >>>> quarterly >>>> board report. >>>> >>>> The board meeting is scheduled for . The report >>>> for your podling will form a part of the Incubator PMC report. The >>>> Incubator PMC >>>> requires your report to be submitted one week before the board meeting, to >>>> allow >>>> sufficient time for review. >>>> >>>> Please submit your report with sufficient time to allow the incubator PMC, >>>> and >>>> subsequently board members to review and digest. Again, the very latest you >>>> should submit your report is one week prior to the board meeting. >>>> >>>> Thanks, >>>> >>>> The Apache Incubator PMC >>>> >>>> Submitting your Report >>>> ---------------------- >>>> >>>> Your report should contain the following: >>>> >>>> * Your project name >>>> * A brief description of your project, which assumes no knowledge of the >>>> project >>>> or necessarily of its field >>>> * A list of the three most important issues to address in the move towards >>>> graduation. >>>> * Any issues that the Incubator PMC or ASF Board might wish/need to be >>>> aware of >>>> * How has the community developed since the last report >>>> * How has the project developed since the last report. >>>> >>>> This should be appended to the Incubator Wiki page at: >>>> >>>> http://wiki.apache.org/incubator/August2010 >>>> >>>> Note: This manually populated. You may need to wait a little before this >>>> page is >>>> created from a template. >>>> >>>> Mentors >>>> ------- >>>> Mentors should review reports for their project(s) and sign them off on the >>>> Incubator wiki page. Signing off reports shows that you are following the >>>> project - projects that are not signed may raise alarms for the Incubator >>>> PMC. >>>> >>>> Incubator PMC >>>> >>> >>> >>> >>
