Benoit Claise has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-aqm-codel-07: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-aqm-codel/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Same view as Warren point 1. I just wondered: why this section 5 as that position? 1: I found the overall structure of the document a little odd -- I'm assuming that this is an artifact of its history, or merging multiple documents into one, or similar. It starts off with a nice description of queuing and CoDel. It then gets all technical with the pseudo-code (which was really helpful). Where it feels a little odd is that it then suddenly goes back to being much more introductory feeling (Section 5 - ), and feels like it repeats some of the earlier material. Reformatting it all to address this seems like overkill, but perhaps a readers note to suggest people who want more background should skip ahead then come back. _______________________________________________ aqm mailing list aqm@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/aqm
