Are we really going to spend this much time rethinking bullet points? Move e to f, insert new e, move on. This is not a complicated proposal. It makes sense.
I agree it is clearer as a diff with an attached redline than as a full replacement text. Beyond that, let’s leave it alone and move it forward. Owen > On Jun 26, 2015, at 15:22 , William Herrin <b...@herrin.us> wrote: > > On Fri, Jun 26, 2015 at 1:55 AM, Scott Leibrand <scottleibr...@gmail.com> > wrote: >> As shepherd, I would be inclined to revise the policy statement so that it >> inserts e) and renumbers the current e) to f), rather than replacing the >> entire section as currently worded. Basically that would just mean >> promoting "b. General Comments:" to become the policy text. >> >> Bill, would that be sufficient for you, given the desire (for clarity) to >> have all the explicit cases listed first and the catchall at the end? > > Hi Scott, > > I think there's sound reasoning for the catchall to come last. Maybe > ask staff for advice? Reordering is generally a bad thing for this > sort of document, but every rule has its exceptions. If staff concurs > that reordering here is the optimal choice, I'd be satisfied. > > Maybe there's a third way we're not seeing, like retiring e, adding > the new element as f, and then re-inserting the catchall some other > way, point g or as a sentence that follows the ordered list. > > Regards, > Bill > > > > > -- > William Herrin ................ her...@dirtside.com b...@herrin.us > Owner, Dirtside Systems ......... Web: <http://www.dirtside.com/> > _______________________________________________ > PPML > You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to > the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List (ARIN-PPML@arin.net). > Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: > http://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml > Please contact i...@arin.net if you experience any issues. _______________________________________________ PPML You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List (ARIN-PPML@arin.net). Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: http://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml Please contact i...@arin.net if you experience any issues.
