Hi Owen,

Thank you for the initial feedback.

Do you have any feedback regarding the suggestion to capitalize the term
"Community Networks" where it occurs in this section to reference the
Section 2 definition that exists?

Thanks,
Matthew Wilder


On Mon, Dec 18, 2023 at 12:23 PM Owen DeLong <o...@delong.com> wrote:

> I don’t favor striking the first paragraph. While the topics are out of
> scope for policy, they provide a good record of the rationale behind this
> otherwise strange carveout. Losing the rationale would likely eventually
> lead to losing track of why the policy exists, potentially resulting in
> loss of the policy.
>
> Owen
>
>
> On Dec 18, 2023, at 11:25, Matthew Wilder via ARIN-PPML <
> arin-ppml@arin.net> wrote:
>
> Hello community members,
>
> Thank you to everyone who has provided inputs for the working group's
> consideration with regard to Section 6 policies. There have been great
> discussions that we as a working group (and Advisory Council more broadly)
> are taking note of.
>
> In the final Section 6 topic that the NRPM Working Group wishes to bring
> to the community's attention, we will be looking at 6.5.9 Community Network
> Allocations.
>
> We wonder if it might be beneficial to strike the entire first paragraph,
> which provides some context which is somewhat beyond the scope of policy
> (for instance mentioning the budgets of community networks). The material
> bits of policy do not appear to reside in that paragraph, and this
> paragraph reads to us more like a problem statement rather than policy.
>
>
> Additionally we would like to suggest the capitalization of all instances
> of "Community Networks" in the entire section and its subsections to
> properly reference the definition of this term found in section 2.
>
>
> We very much appreciate your consideration and any feedback you have to
> these suggestions as we measure what actions we might take to improve
> Section 6.
>
>
> Best regards,
>
>
> Matthew Wilder
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