+1 to all

Just a minor grammatical quibble regarding the text for "subscribe": the phrases ending with a preposition seem somewhat awkward to me - in particular the double "to". If you think I'm being overly dogmatic, though, feel free too ignore.

Possible replacement text:

-  Attribute Value: subscribe
-  Description: A URI that refers to a feed document containing a
set of the most recent entries in the feed. This is the URI to which
a UA should subscribe to keep abreast of changes in the feed. When
different from the URI of the document where it occurs, it indicates
that its value should be used for this purpose in place of the
current document's URI.
 -  Expected display characteristics: Undefined.
 -  Security considerations: Users should be informed of the actual
URI to which they are subscribing, and subscription should only take place
when it is explicitly requested.

I'm not sure about the use of UA though: should that be client? agent? Atom processor?

Regards
James

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